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Co-authored-by: Richard Sill <[email protected]>

Author: angrykoala

modules/ROOT/pages/optimization.adoc

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 = Optimization
 
 
-This chapter contains some optimizations to improve the performance of a production system using `@neo4j/graphql`.
+This page contains optimizations to improve the performance of a production system using `@neo4j/graphql`.
 
-== Schema Optimisations
-This section covers improvements to reduce the size of the generated schema. Reducing the schema size has the following performance benefits:
+== Schema optimizations
+This section covers optimizations to reduce the size of the generated schema. Reducing the schema size has the following performance benefits:
 
-* Reduce the startup time of the server.
+* Reduce server startup time.
 * Reduce memory footprint.
 
 === Exclude `@deprecated` fields
 The `@neo4j/graphql` library generates some GraphQL fields and operations marked as `@deprecated`. These exists to keep compatibility with previous versions of the library.
 
-If you are not using these deprecated fields, you can disable generation for these with the `excludeDeprecatedFields` flag in the library setup. 
+If you are not using these deprecated fields, you can disable their generation with the `excludeDeprecatedFields` flag in the library setup. 
 
 The following example disables all deprecated fields that are generated in the library: