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Co-authored-by: Therese Magnusson <[email protected]>

Author: phil198

modules/ROOT/pages/authentication-authorization/property-based-access-control.adoc

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ CREATE ROLE regularUsers;
 [[property-based-access-control]]
 = Property-based access control
 
-Property-based access control grants/denies permission to read or traverse elements based on property/value conditions.
+Property-based access control grants or denies permission to read or traverse nodes or relationships based on property/value conditions.
 Each property-based privilege can only be restricted by a single property.
-For information and syntax for these privileges, see xref:authentication-authorization/privileges-reads.adoc[Read privileges].
+For information about and syntax for these privileges, see xref:authentication-authorization/privileges-reads.adoc[Read privileges].
 
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