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Co-authored-by: Reneta Popova <[email protected]>

Author: NataliaIvakina

modules/ROOT/pages/backup-restore/online-backup.adoc

@@ -472,17 +472,17 @@ You can do this by setting the option `--prefer-diff-as-parent` to `True`.
 This can be used to ensure you have differential backups for all transactions, which would allow you to restore to any point in time.
 Otherwise, the transactions between a full backup and the previous differential backup will not be backed up as individual transactions.
 
-The examples below cover different scenarios for using the `--prefer-diff-as-parent` option.
+The following examples cover different scenarios for using the `--prefer-diff-as-parent` option.
 
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 [role=include-with-Chain-with-full-and-differential-backups]
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-Let's assume that every hour you write 10 transactions to the `neo4j` database, except from 12:30-13:30, when you do not write any transaction.
+Let's assume that you write 10 transactions to the `neo4j` database every hour, except from 12:30 to 13:30, when you do not write any transactions.
 
 There is a backup job that takes a backup every hour and a full backup every four hours.
-We refer as an _empty_ backup a backup that has no transactions, meaning that both the lower transaction ID and the upper transaction ID are zero.
+An empty backup has no transactions, meaning that both the lower transaction ID and the upper transaction ID are zero.
 
 Imagine you have the following backup chain:
 
@@ -629,8 +629,8 @@ Let's assume that the database is empty and you do not write anything to it, whi
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-In this case, you cannot perform a differential backup with the `--type=DIFF` option, and the below command fails anyway, whether you used the `--prefer-diff-as-parent` or not.
-This occurs because we are looking for the *latest non-empty* backup, and there are only empty backups.
+In this case, you cannot perform a differential backup with the `--type=DIFF` option, and the below command will fail anyway, whether you use the `--prefer-diff-as-parent` or not.
+This occurs because you are looking for the *latest non-empty* backup, and there are only empty backups.
 
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@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ neo4j-admin database backup \
 neo4j
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-But if you select the `--type=AUTO` option, the command will succeed, and the result would be another empty *full* backup.
+But if you select the `--type=AUTO` option, the command will succeed, and the result will be another empty *full* backup.
 
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