review fixes

Author: HannesSandberg

modules/ROOT/pages/authentication-authorization/database-administration.adoc

@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ Use `REVOKE` if you want to remove a privilege.
 ====
 
 Common errors, such as misspellings or attempts to revoke privileges that have not been granted or denied, will lead to notifications.
-Notifications for impossible `REVOKE` commands where any of the user, role or database does not exist have been replaced with errors in Cypher 25.
+In Cypher 25, notifications for impossible `REVOKE` commands, where a user, a role, or a database does not exist, have been replaced with errors.
 See link:{neo4j-docs-base-uri}/status-codes/{page-version}/notifications/all-notifications[Status Codes for Errors & Notifications -> Server notifications] for details on notifications.
 
 The hierarchy between the different database privileges is shown in the image below.

modules/ROOT/pages/authentication-authorization/manage-privileges.adoc

@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ Use `REVOKE` if you want to remove a privilege.
 ====
 
 Common errors, such as misspellings or attempts to revoke privileges that have not been granted or denied, will result in notifications.
-Notifications for impossible `REVOKE` commands where any of the user, role or database does not exist have been replaced with errors in Cypher 25.
+In Cypher 25, notifications for impossible `REVOKE` commands, where a user, a role, or a database does not exist, have been replaced with errors.
 See link:{neo4j-docs-base-uri}/status-codes/{page-version}/notifications/all-notifications[Status Codes -> Notification codes] for details on notifications.
 
 The general `GRANT` and `DENY` syntaxes are illustrated in the following image:

modules/ROOT/pages/authentication-authorization/manage-roles.adoc

@@ -814,7 +814,7 @@ REVOKE ROLES role1, role2 FROM user1, user2, user3
 ----
 
 Common errors, such as misspellings or attempts to revoke roles from users who have not been granted those roles, will lead to notifications.
-Notifications for impossible `REVOKE` commands where any of the user, role or database does not exist have been replaced with errors in Cypher 25.
+In Cypher 25, notifications for impossible `REVOKE` commands, where a user, a role, or a database does not exist, have been replaced with errors.
 See link:{neo4j-docs-base-uri}/status-codes/{page-version}/notifications/all-notifications[Status Codes -> Notification codes] for details on notifications.
 
 [[access-control-drop-roles]]