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Co-authored-by: Balazs Lendvai <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Anna Sjerling <[email protected]>

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modules/ROOT/pages/clustering/databases.adoc

@@ -227,11 +227,11 @@ neo4j@neo4j> DRYRUN REALLOCATE DATABASES;
 
 [role=label--new-5.24]
 [[recreate-databases]]
-== Recreate databases using a procedure
+== Recreate databases
 
 Neo4j 5.24 introduces the xref:reference/procedures.adoc#procedure_dbms_cluster_recreateDatabase[`dbms.cluster.recreateDatabase()`] procedure, which allows you:
 
-* To restore a database store to a specified backup, while keeping all the users and roles (metadata) for the database.
+* To restore a database to a specified backup, while keeping all the associated privileges for the database.
 
 * To restore a database to a write mode again after it has been lost (for example, due to a disaster).
 See xref:clustering/disaster-recovery.adoc[] for more information.
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ See xref:clustering/disaster-recovery.adoc[] for more information.
 The recreate procedure works only for real user databases and not for composite databases, or the `system` database.
 
 Keep in mind the recreate procedure results in downtime while the stores get updated.
-The time is unbounded and may depend on the store size and network speed.
+The time is unbounded and may depend on different factors -- for example, the size of the store, network speed, etc.
 
 The recreate procedure selects the most up-to-date seed from the defined seeding servers.
 If only a subset of the previous cluster members is specified as seeders, there is a risk of data loss.
@@ -254,14 +254,14 @@ If CDC is enabled for the database, it will still be enabled after recreating th
 See link:https://neo4j.com/docs/cdc/current/[CDC documentation] for more details.
 
 Before recreating a database, any eventual quarantined states need to be addressed.
-For more information, refer to the quarantined state documentation.
+For more information, see xref:clustering/databases.adoc#recreate-databases[Standard databases -> Error handling].
 
 You need xref:authentication-authorization/dbms-administration.adoc#access-control-dbms-administration-database-management[the DBMS `DATABASE MANAGEMENT` privileges] to run the recreate procedure. 
 
 [[recreate-seeding-options]]
 === Seeding options and configurations
 
-The store to be used during the recreation can be defined in three different ways.
+The store to be used during the recreation of a database can be defined in three different ways.
 One method uses a backup, while the two others use available allocations in the cluster.
 
 Additionally, you have the option to modify <<alter-topology-recreate, the topology>> during the recreation process.