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Author: renetapopova

modules/ROOT/pages/authentication-authorization/manage-privileges.adoc

@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ For more details about the syntax descriptions, see xref:database-administration
 Administrators can use the Cypher commands `GRANT`, `DENY`, and `REVOKE` to manage Neo4j graph administrative rights.
 These commands can be used to grant or deny privileges to roles, and to revoke previously granted or denied privileges.
 The privileges can be granted or denied on the entire graph, or on specific elements within the graph.
-The privileges can also be made immutable, which means they cannot be revoked unless auth is disabled.
+The privileges can also be made immutable, which means they cannot be granted, denied, or revoked unless auth is disabled.
 
 [[components-of-the-graph-privilege-commands]]
 === Components of the graph privilege commands

modules/ROOT/pages/authentication-authorization/privileges-reads.adoc

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ There are three separate read privileges:
 * xref:authentication-authorization/privileges-reads.adoc#access-control-privileges-reads-read[`READ`] - enables the specified properties of the found entities to be read.
 * xref:authentication-authorization/privileges-reads.adoc#access-control-privileges-reads-match[`MATCH`] - combines both `TRAVERSE` and `READ`, enabling an entity to be found and its properties read.
 
-For more details about the syntax descriptions, see xref:/authentication-authorization/manage-privileges.adoc#components-of-the-graph-privilege-commands[Components of the graph privilege commands].
+For more details about how to read the administration commands syntax, see xref:database-administration/syntax.adoc#administration-syntax-reading[Reading the administration commands syntax] and xref:authentication-authorization/manage-privileges.adoc#components-of-the-graph-privilege-commands[Components of the graph privilege commands].
 
 [[access-control-privileges-reads-traverse]]
 == The `TRAVERSE` privilege

modules/ROOT/pages/authentication-authorization/privileges-writes.adoc

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ There are also compound privileges that combine the above specific privileges:
 * <<access-control-privileges-writes-write, `WRITE`>> - allows all `WRITE` operations on an entire graph.
 * <<access-control-privileges-writes-all, `ALL GRAPH PRIVILEGES`>> - allows all `READ` and `WRITE` operations on an entire graph.
 
-For more details about the syntax descriptions, see xref:/authentication-authorization/manage-privileges.adoc#components-of-the-graph-privilege-commands[Components of the graph privilege commands].
+For more details about how to read the administration commands syntax, see xref:database-administration/syntax.adoc#administration-syntax-reading[Reading the administration commands syntax] and xref:authentication-authorization/manage-privileges.adoc#components-of-the-graph-privilege-commands[Components of the graph privilege commands].
 
 [[access-control-privileges-writes-create]]
 == The `CREATE` privilege