Improve the article's readability; streamline the language.

[mattmath]

style: improve readability and streamline language

Proposed changes

The article was originally difficult to read, with a high grade level (12). The writing was wordy and conversational, and contained long sentences covering too many topics.

The proposed changes make the writing more direct and "punchy" while breaking up long, complex sentences.

Closes #ISSUE 363

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[mattmath]

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[mattmath]

recheck

[mjang]

Great contribution! I have a couple of suggested changes. I'd love it if you want to talk about it while we're still at the conference.