addressing peer review feedback

Author: syaseen-rh

modules/backing-up-storage-data.adoc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ It is a best practice to back up the data on your persistent volume claims (PVCs
 
 Backing up your data is particularly important before you delete a user and before you uninstall {productname-short}, as all PVCs are deleted when {productname-short} is uninstalled.
 
-For more information about backing up PVCs for your cluster platform, see link:https://docs.redhat.com/en/documentation/openshift_container_platform/{ocp-latest-version}/html/backup_and_restore/oadp-application-backup-and-restore.html[OADP Application backup and restore] in OpenShift Container Platform (OCP) documentation.
+For more information about backing up PVCs for your cluster platform, see link:https://docs.redhat.com/en/documentation/openshift_container_platform/{ocp-latest-version}/html/backup_and_restore/oadp-application-backup-and-restore.html[OADP Application backup and restore] in the OpenShift Container Platform documentation.
 
 [role="_additional-resources"]
 .Additional resources

modules/backing-up-your-cluster.adoc

@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
 = Backing up your cluster
 [role='_abstract']
 
-If you plan to upgrade or uninstall {productname-short} on your cluster, you can backup your cluster's data to restore it to its previous state if necessary.
+If you plan to upgrade or uninstall {productname-short} on your cluster, back up your cluster data so that you can restore it later if needed.
 
 ifdef::upstream,self-managed[]
-For more information, see link:https://docs.redhat.com/en/documentation/openshift_container_platform/{ocp-latest-version}/html-single/backup_and_restore/index[Backup and restore] in OpenShift Container Platform (OCP) documentation.
+For more information, see link:https://docs.redhat.com/en/documentation/openshift_container_platform/{ocp-latest-version}/html-single/backup_and_restore/index[Backup and restore] in the OpenShift Container Platform documentation.
 endif::[]
 
 ifdef::cloud-service[]
-For more information, see link:https://docs.redhat.com/en/documentation/red_hat_openshift_service_on_aws/{rosa-latest-version}/html/backup_and_restore/index[Backup and restore] in Red Hat OpenShift Service on AWS (ROSA) documentation.
+For more information, see link:https://docs.redhat.com/en/documentation/red_hat_openshift_service_on_aws/{rosa-latest-version}/html/backup_and_restore/index[Backup and restore] in the Red Hat OpenShift Service on AWS (ROSA) documentation.
 endif::[]
 
 //[role="_additional-resources"]