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modules/sbo-categories-of-exposable-binding-data.adoc

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== Exposing a constant value as the binding item
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The following examples show how to expose constant value from the `PostgresCluster` custom resource (CR):
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The following examples show how to expose a constant value from the `PostgresCluster` custom resource (CR):
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.Example: Exposing constant value
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.Example: Exposing a constant value
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apiVersion: postgres-operator.crunchydata.com/v1beta1
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<1> Binding `type` that is to be exposed with the `postgresql` value.
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<1> Binding `type` to be exposed with the `postgresql` value.
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== Exposing entries of a collection with the key and value from each entry
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Following is the example for exposing the entries of a collection with the key and value from each entry through annotations:
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Following is the example for exposing the entries of a collection with the key and value from each entry through OLM descriptors:
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== Exposing items of a collection with one key per item
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== Exposing values of collection entries with one key per entry value
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modules/sbo-methods-of-exposing-binding-data.adoc

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The previous example places the name of the secret name in the `{.metadata.name}-pguser-{.metadata.name}` template that resolves to `hippo-pguser-hippo` eventually. The template can contain multiple JSONPath.
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The previous example places the name of the secret name in the `{.metadata.name}-pguser-{.metadata.name}` template that resolves to `hippo-pguser-hippo`. The template can contain multiple JSONPath expressions.
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The previous example places the name of the config map in the `{.metadata.name}-config` template that resolves to `hippo-config` eventually. The template can contain multiple JSONPath.
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