bz1913975: Removed a comma..

Author: johnwilkins

modules/ipi-install-configure-network-components-to-run-on-the-control-plane.adoc

@@ -9,21 +9,21 @@ Configure networking components to run exclusively on the control plane nodes. B
 
 .Procedure
 
-. Change to the directory storing the `install-config.yaml` file.
+. Change to the directory storing the `install-config.yaml` file:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
 $ cd ~/clusterconfigs
 ----
 
-. Switch to the `manifests` subdirectory.
+. Switch to the `manifests` subdirectory:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
 $ cd manifests
 ----
 
-. Create a file named `cluster-network-avoid-workers-99-config.yaml`.
+. Create a file named `cluster-network-avoid-workers-99-config.yaml`:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ This manifest places the `apiVIP` and `ingressVIP` virtual IP addresses on the c
 
 . Save the `cluster-network-avoid-workers-99-config.yaml` file.
 
-. Create a `manifests/cluster-ingress-default-ingresscontroller.yaml` file.
+. Create a `manifests/cluster-ingress-default-ingresscontroller.yaml` file:
 +
 [source,yaml]
 ----
@@ -112,9 +112,9 @@ $ sed -i "s;mastersSchedulable: false;mastersSchedulable: true;g" clusterconfigs
 If control plane nodes are not schedulable, deploying the cluster will fail.
 ====
 
-. Before deploying the cluster, ensure that the `api.<cluster-name>.<domain>` domain name is resolvable in the DNS. When you configure network components to run exclusively on the control plane, the internal DNS resolution no longer works for worker nodes, which is an expected outcome.
+. Before deploying the cluster, ensure that the `api.<cluster-name>.<domain>` domain name is resolvable in the external DNS server. When you configure network components to run exclusively on the control plane, the internal DNS resolution no longer works for worker nodes, which is an expected outcome.
 +
 [IMPORTANT]
 ====
-Failure to create a DNS record for the API precludes worker nodes from joining the cluster.
+Failure to create a DNS record for the `api.<cluster-name>.<domain>` domain name in the external DNS server precludes worker nodes from joining the cluster.
 ====

modules/ipi-install-network-requirements.adoc

@@ -49,6 +49,11 @@ test-cluster.example.com
 
 ifeval::[{product-version}>4.7]
 {product-title} 4.8 and later releases include functionality that uses cluster membership information to generate A/AAAA records. This resolves the node names to their IP addresses. After the nodes are registered with the API, the cluster can disperse node information without using CoreDNS-mDNS. This eliminates the network traffic associated with multicast DNS.
+
+[IMPORTANT]
+====
+You must create a DNS entry for the `api.<cluster-name>.<domain>` domain name on the external DNS because removing CoreDNS causes the local entry to disappear. Failure to create a DNS record for the `api.<cluster-name>.<domain>` domain name in the external DNS server precludes worker nodes from joining the cluster.
+====
 endif::[]
 
 ifdef::upstream[]