writing style changes

Author: SNiemann15

modules/ibmz-configure-devices-manually.adoc

@@ -16,21 +16,21 @@ Tasks in this section describe how to manually configure additional devices in a
 
 .Procedure
 
-. Connect to the node via SSH:
+. Connect to the node via SSH by running the following command:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
 $ ssh <user>@<node_ip_address>
 ----
 +
-You can also start a debug session to the node: 
+You can also start a debug session to the node by running the following command: 
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
 $ oc debug node/<node_name>
 ----
 
-. Enable the devices with the `chzdev` command. For example:
+. To enable the devices with the `chzdev` command, enter the following command:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----

modules/ibmz-configure-devices-mco.adoc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 [id="configure-additional-devices-using-mco_{context}"]
 = Configuring additional devices using the Machine Config Operator (MCO) 
 
-Tasks in this section describe how to use features of the Machine Config Operator to configure additional devices in an {ibmzProductName} or LinuxONE environment. Configuring devices with the MCO is persistent but only allows specific configurations for compute nodes. MCO does not allow control plane nodes to have different configurations.
+Tasks in this section describe how to use features of the Machine Config Operator (MCO) to configure additional devices in an {ibmzProductName} or LinuxONE environment. Configuring devices with the MCO is persistent but only allows specific configurations for compute nodes. MCO does not allow control plane nodes to have different configurations.
 
 .Prerequisites
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ ATTR{[ccw/0.0.8000]online}="1"
 LABEL="end_zfcp_host_0.0.8000"
 ----
 
-. Convert the rule to Base64 encoded, by running the following command:
+. Convert the rule to Base64 encoded by running the following command:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ GOTO="end_zfcp_lun_0.0.8000"
 LABEL="end_zfcp_lun_0.0.8000"
 ----
 
-. Convert the rule to Base64 encoded, by running the following command:
+. Convert the rule to Base64 encoded by running the following command:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ ATTR{[ccw/0.0.4444]online}="1"
 LABEL="end_dasd_eckd_0.0.4444"
 ----
 
-. Convert the rule to Base64 encoded, by running the following command:
+. Convert the rule to Base64 encoded by running the following command:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ ATTR{[ccwgroup/0.0.1000]online}="1"
 LABEL="end_qeth_0.0.1000"
 ----
 
-. Convert the rule to Base64 encoded, by running the following command:
+. Convert the rule to Base64 encoded by running the following command:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----

modules/ibmz-enable-multipathing-fcp-luns.adoc

@@ -20,14 +20,14 @@ On {ibmzProductName} and LinuxONE, you can enable multipathing only if you confi
 
 .Procedure
 
-. Connect to the node via SSH:
+. Connect to the node via SSH by running the following command:
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----
 $ ssh <user>@<node_ip_address>
 ----
 +
-You can also start a debug session to the node: 
+You can also start a debug session to the node by running the following command: 
 +
 [source,terminal]
 ----

post_installation_configuration/ibmz-post-install.adoc

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ See link:https://www.ibm.com/docs/en/linux-on-systems?topic=linuxonibm/com.ibm.l
 
 [id="roce-network-cards"]
 == RoCE network Cards 
-RoCE (RDMA over Converged Ethernet) network cards do not need to be enabled and their interfaces can be configured with the Kubernetes NMState Operator whenever they are available in the node. For example, if they are attached in a z/VM environment or passed through in a {op-system-base} KVM environment. 
+RoCE (RDMA over Converged Ethernet) network cards do not need to be enabled and their interfaces can be configured with the Kubernetes NMState Operator whenever they are available in the node. For example, RoCE network cards are available if they are attached in a z/VM environment or passed through in a {op-system-base} KVM environment. 
 
 include::modules/ibmz-enable-multipathing-fcp-luns.adoc[leveloffset=+1]