Merge pull request #43304 from xJustin/remote-health-update

CCXDEV-7584 Update About remote health monitoring docs page

Author: bergerhoffer

support/remote_health_monitoring/about-remote-health-monitoring.adoc

@@ -110,9 +110,9 @@ Red Hat employs technical and organizational measures designed to protect the te
 
 Red Hat may share the data collected through Telemetry and the Insights Operator internally within Red Hat to improve your user experience. Red Hat may share telemetry and configuration data with its business partners in an aggregated form that does not identify customers to help the partners better understand their markets and their customers’ use of Red Hat offerings or to ensure the successful integration of products jointly supported by those partners.
 
-.Third party service providers
+.Third parties
 
-Red Hat may engage certain service providers to assist in the collection and storage of the telemetry and configuration data.
+Red Hat may engage certain third parties to assist in the collection, analysis, and storage of the Telemetry and configuration data.
 
 .User control / enabling and disabling telemetry and configuration data collection