Peer review revision

Author: bscott-rh

_unused_topics/manually-creating-iam.adoc

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ If you use a user-provisioned installation method, you can configure a proxy for
 
 If you want to prevent your cluster on a public cloud from exposing endpoints externally, you can deploy a private cluster with installer-provisioned infrastructure on xref:../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-private.adoc#installing-aws-private[AWS], xref:../installing/installing_azure/installing-azure-private.adoc#installing-azure-private[Azure], or xref:../installing/installing_gcp/installing-gcp-private.adoc#installing-gcp-private[GCP].
 
-If you need to install your cluster that has limited access to the internet, such as a disconnected or restricted network cluster, you can xref:../installing/disconnected_install/installing-mirroring-installation-images.adoc#installing-mirroring-installation-images[mirror the installation packages] and install the cluster from them. Follow detailed instructions for user provisioned infrastructure installations into restricted networks for xref:../installing/installing_aws/upi/installing-restricted-networks-aws.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-aws[AWS], xref:../installing/installing_gcp/installing-restricted-networks-gcp.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-gcp[GCP], xref:../installing/installing_ibm_z/installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z[{ibm-z-name} or {ibm-linuxone-name}], xref:../installing/installing_ibm_z/installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z-kvm.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z-kvm[{ibm-z-name} or {ibm-linuxone-name} with {op-system-base} KVM], xref:../installing/installing_ibm_power/installing-restricted-networks-ibm-power.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-ibm-power[{ibm-power-name}], xref:../installing/installing_vsphere/upi/installing-restricted-networks-vsphere.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-vsphere[vSphere], or xref:../installing/installing_bare_metal/installing-restricted-networks-bare-metal.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-bare-metal[bare metal]. You can also install a cluster into a restricted network using installer-provisioned infrastructure by following detailed instructions for xref:../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-restricted-networks-aws-installer-provisioned.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-aws-installer-provisioned[AWS], xref:../installing/installing_gcp/installing-restricted-networks-gcp-installer-provisioned.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-gcp-installer-provisioned[GCP], xref:../installing/installing_ibm_cloud_public/installing-ibm-cloud-restricted.adoc#installing-ibm-cloud-restricted[{ibm-cloud-name}], xref:../installing/installing_nutanix/installing-restricted-networks-nutanix-installer-provisioned.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-nutanix-installer-provisioned[Nutanix], xref:../installing/installing_openstack/installing-openstack-installer-restricted.adoc#installing-openstack-installer-restricted[{rh-openstack}], and xref:../installing/installing_vsphere/ipi/installing-restricted-networks-installer-provisioned-vsphere.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-installer-provisioned-vsphere[vSphere].
+If you need to install your cluster that has limited access to the internet, such as a disconnected or restricted network cluster, you can xref:../installing/disconnected_install/installing-mirroring-installation-images.adoc#installing-mirroring-installation-images[mirror the installation packages] and install the cluster from them. Follow detailed instructions for user-provisioned infrastructure installations into restricted networks for xref:../installing/installing_aws/upi/installing-restricted-networks-aws.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-aws[AWS], xref:../installing/installing_gcp/installing-restricted-networks-gcp.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-gcp[GCP], xref:../installing/installing_ibm_z/installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z[{ibm-z-name} or {ibm-linuxone-name}], xref:../installing/installing_ibm_z/installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z-kvm.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-ibm-z-kvm[{ibm-z-name} or {ibm-linuxone-name} with {op-system-base} KVM], xref:../installing/installing_ibm_power/installing-restricted-networks-ibm-power.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-ibm-power[{ibm-power-name}], xref:../installing/installing_vsphere/upi/installing-restricted-networks-vsphere.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-vsphere[vSphere], or xref:../installing/installing_bare_metal/installing-restricted-networks-bare-metal.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-bare-metal[bare metal]. You can also install a cluster into a restricted network using installer-provisioned infrastructure by following detailed instructions for xref:../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-restricted-networks-aws-installer-provisioned.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-aws-installer-provisioned[AWS], xref:../installing/installing_gcp/installing-restricted-networks-gcp-installer-provisioned.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-gcp-installer-provisioned[GCP], xref:../installing/installing_ibm_cloud_public/installing-ibm-cloud-restricted.adoc#installing-ibm-cloud-restricted[{ibm-cloud-name}], xref:../installing/installing_nutanix/installing-restricted-networks-nutanix-installer-provisioned.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-nutanix-installer-provisioned[Nutanix], xref:../installing/installing_openstack/installing-openstack-installer-restricted.adoc#installing-openstack-installer-restricted[{rh-openstack}], and xref:../installing/installing_vsphere/ipi/installing-restricted-networks-installer-provisioned-vsphere.adoc#installing-restricted-networks-installer-provisioned-vsphere[vSphere].
 
 
 If you need to deploy your cluster to an xref:../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-government-region.adoc#installing-aws-government-region[AWS GovCloud region], xref:../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-china.adoc#installing-aws-china-region[AWS China region], or xref:../installing/installing_azure/installing-azure-government-region.adoc#installing-azure-government-region[Azure government region], you can configure those custom regions during an installer-provisioned infrastructure installation.

installing/installing-preparing.adoc

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ include::modules/installation-aws-add-iam-roles.adoc[leveloffset=+2]
 
 [role="_additional-resources"]
 .Additional resources
-* See xref:../../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-customizations.adoc#installation-launching-installer_installing-aws-customizations[Deploying the cluster].
+* xref:../../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-customizations.adoc#installation-launching-installer_installing-aws-customizations[Deploying the cluster]
 
 include::modules/installation-aws-access-analyzer.adoc[leveloffset=+2]
 

installing/installing_aws/installing-aws-account.adoc

@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ include::modules/logging-in-by-using-the-web-console.adoc[leveloffset=+2]
 [role="_additional-resources"]
 .Additional resources
 
-* For more information about accessing and understanding the {product-title} web console, see xref:../../../web_console/web-console.adoc#web-console[Accessing the web console] for more details about accessing and understanding the {product-title} web console.
+* xref:../../../web_console/web-console.adoc#web-console[Accessing the web console]
 
 // Verifying nodes that were created with edge compute pool
 include::modules/machine-edge-pool-review-nodes.adoc[leveloffset=+2]
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ include::modules/cluster-telemetry.adoc[leveloffset=+1]
 [role="_additional-resources"]
 .Additional resources
 
-* For more information about the Telemetry service, see xref:../../../support/remote_health_monitoring/about-remote-health-monitoring.adoc#about-remote-health-monitoring[About remote health monitoring].
+* xref:../../../support/remote_health_monitoring/about-remote-health-monitoring.adoc#about-remote-health-monitoring[About remote health monitoring]
 
 .Next steps
 

installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-localzone.adoc

@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ include::modules/nw-modifying-operator-install-config.adoc[leveloffset=+1]
 
 [NOTE]
 ====
-For more information on using a Network Load Balancer (NLB) on AWS, see xref:../../../networking/configuring_ingress_cluster_traffic/configuring-ingress-cluster-traffic-aws.adoc#configuring-ingress-cluster-traffic-aws-network-load-balancer[Configuring Ingress cluster traffic on AWS using a Network Load Balancer].
+For more information on using a Network Load Balancer (NLB) on AWS, see xref:../../../networking/configuring_ingress_cluster_traffic/configuring-ingress-cluster-traffic-aws.adoc#nw-configuring-ingress-cluster-traffic-aws-network-load-balancer_configuring-ingress-cluster-traffic-aws[Configuring Ingress cluster traffic on AWS using a Network Load Balancer].
 ====
 
 include::modules/nw-aws-nlb-new-cluster.adoc[leveloffset=+1]

installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-network-customizations.adoc

@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ include::modules/logging-in-by-using-the-web-console.adoc[leveloffset=+2]
 [role="_additional-resources"]
 .Additional resources
 
-* For more information about accessing and understanding the {product-title} web console, see xref:../../../web_console/web-console.adoc#web-console[Accessing the web console] for more details about accessing and understanding the {product-title} web console.
+* xref:../../../web_console/web-console.adoc#web-console[Accessing the web console]
 
 // Verifying nodes that were created with edge compute pool
 include::modules/machine-edge-pool-review-nodes.adoc[leveloffset=+2]
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ include::modules/cluster-telemetry.adoc[leveloffset=+1]
 [role="_additional-resources"]
 .Additional resources
 
-* For more information about the Telemetry service, see xref:../../../support/remote_health_monitoring/about-remote-health-monitoring.adoc#about-remote-health-monitoring[About remote health monitoring].
+* xref:../../../support/remote_health_monitoring/about-remote-health-monitoring.adoc#about-remote-health-monitoring[About remote health monitoring]
 
 .Next steps
 

installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-wavelength-zone.adoc

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ include::modules/ipsec-impact-networking.adoc[leveloffset=+1]
 [id="optimizing-networking-additional-resources"]
 == Additional resources
 
-* xref:../../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-network-customizations.adoc#modifying-nwoperator-config-startup_installing-aws-network-customizations[Modifying advanced network configuration parameters]
+* xref:../../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-network-customizations.adoc#modifying-nwoperator-config-startup_installing-aws-network-customizations[Specifying advanced network configuration]
 * xref:../../networking/cluster-network-operator.adoc#nw-operator-configuration-parameters-for-ovn-sdn_cluster-network-operator[Configuration parameters for the OVN-Kubernetes network plugin]
 * xref:../../networking/cluster-network-operator.adoc#nw-operator-configuration-parameters-for-openshift-sdn_cluster-network-operator[Configuration parameters for the OpenShift SDN network plugin]
 * xref:../../scalability_and_performance/scaling-worker-latency-profiles.adoc#scaling-worker-latency-profiles[Improving cluster stability in high latency environments using worker latency profiles]

scalability_and_performance/optimization/optimizing-networking.adoc

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ include::modules/security-hardening-how.adoc[leveloffset=+1]
 * xref:../../installing/install_config/installing-customizing.adoc#installing-customizing[Customizing nodes]
 * xref:../../nodes/nodes/nodes-nodes-managing.adoc#nodes-nodes-kernel-arguments_nodes-nodes-managing[Adding kernel arguments to nodes]
 ifndef::openshift-origin[]
-* xref:../../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-customizations.adoc#installation-configuration-parameters_installing-aws-customizations[Installation configuration parameters] - see `fips`
+* xref:../../installing/installing_aws/installation-config-parameters-aws.adoc#installation-configuration-parameters-optional_installation-config-parameters-aws[Optional configuration parameters]
 * xref:../../installing/installing-fips.adoc#installing-fips[Support for FIPS cryptography]
 * link:https://access.redhat.com/articles/3359851[{op-system-base} core crypto components]
 endif::[]

security/container_security/security-hardening.adoc

@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ Before you can install {SMProductName}, review the installation activities, ensu
 ifdef::openshift-enterprise[]
 * Review the xref:../../architecture/architecture-installation.adoc#installation-overview_architecture-installation[{product-title} {product-version} overview].
 * Install {product-title} {product-version}.
-** xref:../../installing/installing_aws/installing-aws-account.adoc#installing-aws-account[Install {product-title} {product-version} on AWS]
-** xref:../../installing/installing_aws/upi/installing-aws-user-infra.adoc#installing-aws-user-infra[Install {product-title} {product-version} on user-provisioned AWS]
+** xref:../../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-default.adoc#installing-aws-default[Install {product-title} {product-version} on AWS]
+** xref:../../installing/installing_aws/upi/installing-aws-user-infra.adoc#installing-aws-user-infra[Install {product-title} {product-version} on AWS with user-provisioned infrastructure]
 ** xref:../../installing/installing_bare_metal/installing-bare-metal.adoc#installing-bare-metal[Install {product-title} {product-version} on bare metal]
 ** xref:../../installing/installing_vsphere/upi/installing-vsphere.adoc#installing-vsphere[Install {product-title} {product-version} on vSphere]
 +

service_mesh/v1x/preparing-ossm-installation.adoc

@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ Before you can install {SMProductName}, you must subscribe to {product-title} an
 ifdef::openshift-enterprise[]
 * Review the xref:../../architecture/architecture-installation.adoc#installation-overview_architecture-installation[{product-title} {product-version} overview].
 * Install {product-title} {product-version}. If you are installing {SMProductName} on a xref:../../installing/installing-preparing.adoc#supported-installation-methods-for-different-platforms[restricted network], follow the instructions for your chosen {product-title} infrastructure.
-** xref:../../installing/installing_aws/installing-aws-account.adoc#installing-aws-account[Install {product-title} {product-version} on AWS]
-** xref:../../installing/installing_aws/upi/installing-aws-user-infra.adoc#installing-aws-user-infra[Install {product-title} {product-version} on user-provisioned AWS]
+** xref:../../installing/installing_aws/ipi/installing-aws-default.adoc#installing-aws-default[Install {product-title} {product-version} on AWS]
+** xref:../../installing/installing_aws/upi/installing-aws-user-infra.adoc#installing-aws-user-infra[Install {product-title} {product-version} on AWS with user-provisioned infrastructure]
 ** xref:../../installing/installing_bare_metal/installing-bare-metal.adoc#installing-bare-metal[Install {product-title} {product-version} on bare metal]
 ** xref:../../installing/installing_vsphere/upi/installing-vsphere.adoc#installing-vsphere[Install {product-title} {product-version} on vSphere]
 ** xref:../../installing/installing_ibm_z/installing-ibm-z.adoc#installing-ibm-z[Install {product-title} {product-version} on {ibm-z-name} and {ibm-linuxone-name}]