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docs_user/modules/con_adoption-guidelines.adoc

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All commands in the adoption documentation are examples. Do not copy and paste the commands without understanding what the commands do.
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* To minimize the risk of an adoption failure, reduce the number of environmental differences between the staging environment and the production sites.
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* If the staging environment is not representative of the production sites, or a staging environment is not available, then you must plan to include contingency time in case the adoption fails.
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* If the staging environment is not representative of the production sites or if a staging environment is not available, you must plan to include contingency time in case the adoption fails.
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* Review your custom {rhos_prev_long} ({OpenStackShort}) service configuration at every major release.
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** Every major release upgrades through multiple OpenStack releases.
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** Each major release might deprecate configuration options or change the format of the configuration.

scenarios/README.md

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- `deploy_command`: string with the stack deploy command to run verbatim,
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if defined, it ignores the `vars` and `args` fields, optional.
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- `stack_nodes`: list of groups for the inventory that contains the nodes that
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will be part of the stack, required. This groups must be a subset of the groups
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will be part of the stack, required. These groups must be a subset of the groups
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used as keys in `hostname_groups_map` and `roles_groups_map`.
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- `routes`: list of routes to define in the nodes' os_net_config template.
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List of dictionaries with the fields `ip_netmask`, `next_hop` and `default`.
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the `adoption_deploy_ceph.yml` playbook exists in the ci-framework (it
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is introduced alongside the role to consume the scenarios defined here by
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[this PR](https://github.com/openstack-k8s-operators/ci-framework/pull/2297)).

tests/roles/ceph_migrate/README.md

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1. It Loads the information from the existing Ceph cluster (deployed daemons,
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1. It loads the information from the existing Ceph cluster (deployed daemons,
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status of the cluster, hostmap, services, monmap, osdmap)
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2. It Validates the retrieved information (the cluster is healthy and it's in a
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2. It validates the retrieved information (the cluster is healthy and it's in a
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analyze the `stdout` of a registered variable, the `community.general.json_query`
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module has been extensively used, and it has been added in the `requirements.yaml`
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