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 # Summarize Image using OCI AI Vision Service and OCI Generative AI Service
 
 ## Introduction
-In this article, we'll explore how to summarize an image using OCI AI Vision Service and OCI Generative AI Service.
+In this article, we'll explore how to describe an image using OCI AI Vision Service and OCI Generative AI Service.
 The application is developed using Oracle VBCS, OIC , OCI AI Vision service and OCI Generative AI Service.
-This integrated approach combines the strengths of OCI AI Vision and OCI Generative AI Service, allowing for efficient and insightful summarization of image content.                                     
+This integrated approach combines the strength of OCI AI Vision and OCI Generative AI Service, allowing for an efficient and insightful summarization of image content.                                     
 
 <img src="./AIVisionApp.jpg>
 </img>
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-Before getting started, make sure you have the access to following services:
+Before getting started, make sure you have the access to these services:
 
 - Oracle Generative AI Service
 - Oracle Vision Service
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 ## AI Vision and OCI Generative AI Service Integration Architecture
 1. AI Vision App using VBCS
-      o	Oracle Visual Builder Cloud Service (VBCS) is a hosted environment for your application development infrastructure. It provides an open-source standards-based integration to develop, collaborate on, and deploy applications within Oracle Cloud. This application is developed in VBCS.
+      o	Oracle Visual Builder Cloud Service (VBCS) is a hosted environment for your application development infrastructure. It provides an open-source standards-based development service to create, collaborate on, and deploy applications within Oracle Cloud. This application is developed in VBCS.
 2.	Image Analysis with OCI AI Vision Service:
       o	The AI Vision service is employed to analyse images.
-      o	It identifies objects within the image using advanced computer vision algorithms.
+      o	It identifies objects within the image by using advanced computer vision algorithms.
 3.	Integration with OCI Generative AI Service:
       o	The extracted object keywords are sent to the OCI Generative AI Service
 4.	Integration with OCI AI Vision and OCI Generative AI Service using OIC:
       o	Oracle Integration Cloud is used to integrate VBCS app and OCI AI Services.
 5.	Summarization Process:
-      o	OCI Generative AI Service generate text utilizes the received keywords from OCI Vision service to generate a concise summary of the image.
+      o	OCI Generative AI Service generates text using the keywords received from OCI Vision service, to create a concise summary of the image.
 
       
 <img src="./AIVisionAppArch.svg>
 </img>
 
-## Application Flow in Detail (VBCS, OIC, OCI Vision, OCI Generative AI)
-   In this app,
-      •	The File Picker action in VBCS allow the user to select the image. 
+## Application Flow in Detail (VBCS, OIC, OCI Vision, OCI Generative AI Service)
+   In this application,
+      •	The File Picker action in VBCS allows the user to select the image. 
       •	Create an integration process in Oracle Integration Cloud (OIC) to handle the communication between   VBCS and OCI Vision Service.
       •	Pass the selected image from VBCS to OCI Vision Service to analyse the image.
       •	OCI Vision Service analyzes the image and identifies objects within it.
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       •	User clicks the "Generate" button in the app to initiate the summary generation.
       •	Configure the OIC integration process to invoke the GenAI service.
       •	Pass the keywords returned by the OCI Vision Service along with any additional relevant information.
-      •	GenAI service processes the received keywords and generates a summary of the image content.
+      •	Generative AI Service processes the received keywords and generates a summary of the image content.
 
          User (VBCS) --> (File Picker) --> |Image| --> (OIC) --> |OCI Vision Service| --> |Detected Keywords| --> (OIC) --> | OCI Generative AI Service  --> |Summary| --> (OIC) --> |Result| --> (VBCS)
 
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 ## Conclusion
 
-In this article, we've covered how to utilise Oracle AI Vision Service features to provide summary of an image using Geneartive AI service .  
-
-Feel free to modify and expand upon this template according to your specific use case and preferences. Good luck with your article!
+In this article, we've covered how to utilise Oracle AI Vision Service features to provide a summary of an image using Geneartive AI service .  
+Feel free to modify and expand upon this template according to your specific use case and preferences.
 
 
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