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pages/account/customer/ovhcloud-account-connect-google-workspace/guide.en-gb.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Enable Google Workspace SSO connections with your OVHcloud account
+title: Enabling Google Workspace SSO connections with your OVHcloud account
 slug: connect-sso-googleworkspace
 excerpt: "Learn how to associate your Google Workspace service with your OVHcloud account via SAML 2.0"
 section: Advanced Usage
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ updated: 2023-03-30
 
 ## Objective
 
-You can use a **unique** Single Sign-On to sign in to your OVHcloud account. To enable these connections, your OVHcloud account and Google Workspace accounts must be configured using Security Assertion Markup Language (SAML) authentication.
+You can use unique **single sign-on** (SSO) to sign in to your OVHcloud account. To enable these connections, your account and Google Workspace accounts have to be configured using Security Assertion Markup Language (SAML) authentication.
 
 **This guide explains how to associate your OVHcloud account with an external Google Workspace service.**
 
@@ -42,15 +42,15 @@ Go to `Apps`{.action} then `Web and mobile apps`{.action}.
 
 Click `Add app`{.action} then `Add custom SAML app`{.action}.
 
-In the "App details" step, add a name for this interconnection. If you are not inspired, **OVHcloud** is a good name. Click `Continue`{.action}.
+In the "App details" step, add a name for this interconnection, **OVHcloud** for example. Click `Continue`{.action}.
 
 ![Add SAML Application, Step 1](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_add_saml_app_step1.png){.thumbnail}
 
-In the "Google Identity Provider details" step, download the metadata file by clicking `Download metadata`{.action} then click `Continue`{.action}.
+In the step "Google Identity Provider details", download the metadata file by clicking `Download metadata`{.action} then click `Continue`{.action}.
 
 ![Add SAML Application, Step 2](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_add_saml_app_step2.png){.thumbnail}
 
-In the "Service provider details" step, complete the `ACS URL` and `Entity ID` fields with the values for your region: 
+In the step "Service provider details", complete the `ACS URL` and `Entity ID` fields with the values for your region: 
 
 - EU region: **ACS URL**: `https://www.ovhcloud.com/eu/auth/saml/acs` and **Entity ID**: `https://www.ovhcloud.com/eu/auth/`
 - CA region: **ACS URL**: `https://www.ovhcloud.com/ca/auth/saml/acs` and **Entity ID**: `https://www.ovhcloud.com/ca/auth/`
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Click `Continue`{.action}.
 
 ![Add SAML application, step 3](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_add_saml_app_step3.png){.thumbnail}
 
-In the Attribute mapping step, add the following mapping:
+In the "Attribute mapping" step, add the following mapping:
 
 - **First Name**: Name
 - **Last Name**: Surname
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Click `Finish`{.action}.
 
 ![Add SAML application, step 4](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_add_saml_app_step4.png){.thumbnail}
 
-Enable access to this application by clicking `OFF for everyone`{.action} in the "User Access" section. Click `ON for everyone`{.action} then the `SAVE`{.action} button.
+Enable access to this application by clicking `OFF for everyone`{.action} in the "User access" section. Click `ON for everyone`{.action} then the `SAVE`{.action} button.
 
 ![Enable app for all users](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_enable_app1.png){.thumbnail}
 
@@ -86,11 +86,11 @@ Your Google Workspace service now trusts OVHcloud as a service provider. The nex
 
 To add Google workspace as a trusted identity provider, you need to provide the identity provider metadata in the [OVHcloud Control Panel](https://www.ovh.com/auth/?action=gotomanager&from=https://www.ovh.co.uk/&ovhSubsidiary=GB).
 
-Once logged-in, click your profile at the top right.
+Once logged in, click your profile at the top right.
 
 ![Top menu OVHcloud](images/ovhcloud_top_menu.png){.thumbnail}
 
-Click your name to access your profile management page.
+Click on your name to access your profile management page.
 
 ![OVHcloud User Information](images/ovhcloud_user_infos.png){.thumbnail}
 
@@ -102,11 +102,11 @@ Click the `SSO Login`{.action} button.
 
 ![OVHcloud SSO connection step 1](images/ovhcloud_user_management_connect_sso_1.png){.thumbnail}
 
-Complete the XML metadata for your Google Workspace service. Enter "Group Attribute Name" as `Group`. Click `Confirm`{.action}.
+Fill in the XML metadata of your Google Workspace service. Enter `Group` as the "Group Attribute Name". Click `Confirm`{.action}.
 
 ![OVHcloud SSO connection step 2](images/ovhcloud_user_management_connect_sso_2.png){.thumbnail}
 
-Now you need to find your Google Workspace as identity provider, as well as default groups.
+Now you need to retrieve your Google Workspace as identity provider, as well as default groups.
 
 ![OVHcloud SSO connection step 3](images/ovhcloud_user_management_connect_sso_3.png){.thumbnail}
 
@@ -121,37 +121,37 @@ The `...`{.action} button allows you to update or delete the SSO, and view its d
 Your Google Workspace is now considered a trusted identity provider. However, you still need to add groups to your OVHcloud account.
 
 > [!warning]
-> If you try to connect via SSO at this point, you will probably obtain a `Not in valid groups` error message.
+> If you try to connect via SSO at this point, you will probably receive a `Not in valid groups` error message.
 >
-> Indeed, your OVHcloud account checks whether the authenticating user belongs to an existing group on the account.
+> That is because your OVHcloud account checks whether the authenticating user belongs to an existing group on the account.
 >
 
-To do this, you must authorise the groups that will be transmitted from Google Workspace to OVHcloud. These groups are the same as those used to categorize your users.
+To resolve this, authorise the groups that will be transmitted from Google Workspace to OVHcloud. These groups are the same as those used to categorise your users.
 
-To do this, log on to the [Google Workspace](https://admin.google.com) administration interface  with your administrator account.
+To do this, log on to the [Google Workspace](https://admin.google.com) administration interface with your administrator account.
 
 Go to `Apps`{.action} then `Web and mobile apps`{.action}.
 
 ![Manage web and mobile apps](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_add_saml_app.png){.thumbnail}
 
-Click the application line you added earlier.
+Click on the line for the application you added in the previous step.
 
 ![List of web and mobile apps](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_list_app.png){.thumbnail}
 
 Click `SAML attribute mapping`{.action} to edit the mapping of information shared between Google Workspace and OVHcloud.
 
 ![SAML Application Detail](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_show_app.png){.thumbnail}
 
-In the "Group membership (optional)" category, add any groups that you want to allow to connect to OVHcloud. In the "App attribute" field, enter `Group`.
+In the "Group membership (optional)" section, add any groups that you want to allow to connect to OVHcloud. In the "App attribute" field, enter `Group`.
 
 You must then assign **roles** to these user groups at OVHcloud. Otherwise, your OVHcloud account does not know what the user is allowed to do and, by default, no rights are assigned.
 
 ![Configuring user groups](images/google_workspace_web_mobile_setup_groups.png){.thumbnail}
 
-From the OVHcloud Control Panel, add a group by clicking the `Declare Group`{.action} button and filling in the fields:
+From the OVHcloud Control Panel, add a group by clicking the `Declare a group`{.action} button and filling in the fields:
 
-- **Group name**: group name within Google Workspace
-- **Role**: level of entitlement granted to this group
+- **Group name**: Group name within Google Workspace
+- **Role**: Level of rights granted to this group
 
 ![Google Workspace User Management Groups](images/ovhcloud_user_management_groups_1.png){.thumbnail}
 
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ You can then verify that the group is added to your OVHcloud account in the "Gro
 
 ![Google Workspace User Management Groups](images/ovhcloud_user_management_groups_3.png){.thumbnail}
 
-When you later log in with a user in the **Intern** group, your OVHcloud account will recognize that the user has the UNPRIVILEGED role specified by his group.
+When you later log in with a user from the **Intern** group, your OVHcloud account will recognise that the user has the role "UNPRIVILEGED" specified by his group.
 
 You will then be able to log out of your account and log back in with your Google Workspace as an identity provider.
 
@@ -171,15 +171,15 @@ On [the OVHcloud login page](https://www.ovh.com/auth/?action=gotomanager&from=h
 
 ![Connection to OVHcloud federation](images/ovhcloud_federation_login_1.png){.thumbnail}
 
-You are then redirected to your Google Workspace login page. Enter a login/password for a user of your Google Workspace, then click the `Sign in`{.action} button.
+You are then redirected to your Google Workspace login page. Enter the login and password for a user of your Google Workspace, then click the `Sign in`{.action} button.
 
 ![OVHcloud Federation login Redirection Google Workspace](images/ovhcloud_federation_login_2.png){.thumbnail}
 
 You are now logged in with the same customer ID, but through your Google Workspace user.
 
 ![OVHcloud User Info Federation](images/ovhcloud_user_infos_federation.png){.thumbnail}
 
-## Go Further
+## Go further
 
 [Creating an OVHcloud account](https://docs.ovh.com/gb/en/customer/create-ovhcloud-account/)