Address steve's comments round 3

Author: ZacBlanco

presto-docs/src/main/sphinx/release/release-0.292.rst

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 * Add support for Iceberg table sort orders. Tables can be created to add a list of `sorted_by` columns which will be used to order files written to the table. `#21977 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/21977>`_
 * Add support for ``UPDATE`` SQL statements. `#24281 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24281>`_
 * Deprecate some table property names in favor of property names from the Iceberg library. See :doc:`/connector/iceberg`. `#24581 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24581>`_
-* Enable manifest caching by default. `#24481 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24481>`_
+* Improve Iceberg queries by enabling manifest file caching by default. `#24481 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24481>`_
 * Update native ``IcebergConnectorProtocol`` to supply ``NotImplemented`` for ``ConnectorDeleteTableHandle`` type. `#24721 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24721>`_
 
 Kudu Connector Changes
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 * Add a separate ConnectorDeleteTableHandle interface for ``ConnectorMetadata.beginDelete`` and ``ConnectorMetadata.finishDelete``, replacing the previous usage of ConnectorTableHandle. `#24528 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24528>`_
 * Update ``beginDelete`` to return new types, and ``finishDelete`` to accept new types in ``ConnectorMetadata``. `#24528 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24528>`_
 * Move IndexSourceNode to the SPI. `#24678 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24678>`_
-* REMOTE_BUFFER_CLOSE_FAILED is now a retriable error. `#24808 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24808>`_
+* Fix query failures by setting ``REMOTE_BUFFER_CLOSE_FAILED`` as a retriable error. `#24808 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24808>`_
 
 
 Elasticsearch Connector Changes
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     * ``shared-arbitrator.memory-pool-min-reclaim-bytes``.
     * ``shared-arbitrator.memory-reclaim-threads-hw-multiplier``.
     `#24720 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24720>`_
-* Set default value for ``task.max-drivers-per-task`` to use thread concurrency of the host `#24642 <>`
 * Add a type parameter for ``ConnectorDeleteTableHandle`` implementations to ``ConnectorProtocolTemplate``, along with support for (de)serialization of connector-specific types.  Existing native connector implementations defining ``ConnectorProtocolTemplate`` specializations must update their definitions to supply their specific type or use ``NotImplemented``. `#24721 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24721>`_
 * Add ``exchange.http-client.request-data-sizes-max-wait-sec`` to native system configs. `#24774 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24774>`_
 * Add ``spill-enabled``, ``join-spill-enabled``, ``aggregation-spill-enabled``, and ``order-by-spill-enabled`` to native system configs. `#24726 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24726>`_
 * Add new error code name ``MEMORY_ARBITRATION_FAILURE`` under error code ``INSUFFICIENT_RESOURCE``. `#24773 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24773>`_
 * Add a native function namespace manager. `#23358 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/23358>`_
 * Add support for ORC reader. `#23037 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/23037>`_
+* Improve ``task.max-drivers-per-task`` by setting the default value to use thread concurrency of the host. `#24642 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24642>`_
 
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