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@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ Release 0.293
 ==============
 
 * Fix ROLLBACK statement to ensure it successfully aborts non-auto commit transactions corrupted by failed statements. `#23247 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/23247>`_
-* Improve performance as introducing Thrift serialization. `#25079 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25079>`_
+* Improve coordinator performance by introducing Thrift serialization. `#25079 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25079>`_
 * Improve performance of ``ORDER BY`` queries on single node execution. `#25022 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25022>`_
 * Add authentication capabilities to Presto router. `#24407 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24407>`_
 * Add coordinator health checks to Presto router. `#24449 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24449>`_
-* Add support for custom scheduler plugin. `#24439 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24439>`_
+* Add support for custom scheduler plugin in the Presto Router. `#24439 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24439>`_
 * Add DDL SQL support for ``SHOW CREATE SCHEMA``. `#24356 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24356>`_
 * Add ``longest_common_prefix`` string function. `#24891 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24891>`_
 * Add support for row filtering and column masking in access control. `#24277 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24277>`_
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Release 0.293
 * Add support for the procedure ``<catalog-name>.system.invalidate_manifest_file_cache()`` for ManifestFile cache invalidation in Iceberg. `#24831 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24831>`_
 * Add support for `JSON <https://prestodb.io/docs/current/language/types.html#json>`_ type in MongoDB. `#25089 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25089>`_
 * Add support for `GEOMETRY <https://prestodb.io/docs/current/language/types.html#geospatial>`_ type in the MySQL connector. `#24996 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24996>`_
-* Add a display for number of queued queries for each Resource Group subgroup in the UI. `#24830 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24830>`_
+* Add a display for number of queued and running queries for each Resource Group subgroup in the UI. `#24830 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24830>`_
 
 **Details**
 ===========
@@ -29,32 +29,31 @@ _______________
 * Fix ROLLBACK statement to ensure it successfully aborts non-auto commit transactions corrupted by failed statements. `#23247 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/23247>`_
 * Fix a bug in left join to semi join optimizer which leads to filter source variable not found error. `#25111 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25111>`_
 * Fix a bug where a mirrored :func:`arrays_overlap(x, y) -> boolean` function does not return the correct value. `#23845 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/23845>`_
-* Fix returning incorrect results from the "second" UDF when a timestamp is in a time zone with an offset that is at the granularity of seconds. `#25090 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25090>`_
-* Fix the issue of sensitive data such as passwords and access keys being exposed in logs by redacting sensitive field values. `#24886 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24886>`_
-* Fix loading Redis HBO provider loading. `#24835 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24835>`_
+* Fix returning incorrect results from the :func:`second(x) -> bigint()` UDF when a timestamp is in a time zone with an offset that is at the granularity of seconds. `#25090 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25090>`_
+* Fix issue with loading Redis HBO provider. `#24835 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24835>`_
 * Improve memory usage of readers of complex type columns. `#24912 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24912>`_
 * Improve ACL check by moving checkQueryIntegrity from Dispatch phase to Analyzer phase. `#24927 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24927>`_
-* Improve performance as introducing Thrift serialization. `#25079 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25079>`_ and `#25020 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25020>`_
+* Improve coordinator performance by introducing Thrift serialization. `#25079 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25079>`_ and `#25020 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25020>`_
 * Improve performance of operator stats reporting. `#24921 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24921>`_
 * Improve performance of ``ORDER BY`` queries on single node execution. `#25022 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25022>`_
 * Improve query plans by converting table scans without data to empty values nodes. `#25155 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25155>`_
 * Improve performance of ``LOJ + IS NULL`` queries by adding distinct on right side of semi-join for it. `#24884 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24884>`_
 * Add DDL SQL support for ``SHOW CREATE SCHEMA``. `#24356 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24356>`_
+* Add `runtime metrics collection for S3 Filesystem <https://facebookincubator.github.io/velox/monitoring/metrics.html#s3-filesystem>`_. `#24554 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24554>`_
 * Add configuration property ``hive.metastore.catalog.name`` to pass catalog names to the metastore, enabling catalog-based schema management and filtering. `#24235 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24235>`_
-* Add type rewrite support for native execution. This feature can be enabled by ``native-execution-type-rewrite-enabled`` configuration property and ``native_execution_type_rewrite_enabled`` session property. `#24916 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24916>`_
 * Add view definitions from Analyzer phase to perform full integrity check on query credentials. `#24955 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24955>`_
-* Add ``cosine_similarity`` function for array arguments. `#25056 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25056>`_
+* Add func:`cosine_similarity` for array arguments. `#25056 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25056>`_
 * Add session property ``query.client-timeout`` to configure how long a query can run without contact from the client application, such as the CLI, before it is abandoned. `#25210 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25210>`_
 * Add ``longest_common_prefix`` string function. `#24891 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24891>`_
 * Replace ``exchange.compression-enabled``,  ``fragment-result-cache.block-encoding-compression-enabled``, ``experimental.spill-compression-enabled`` with ``exchange.compression-codec``, ``fragment-result-cache.block-encoding-compression-codec`` to enable compression codec configurations. Supported codecs include GZIP, LZ4, LZO, SNAPPY, ZLIB and ZSTD. `#24670 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24670>`_
 * Replace dependency from PostgreSQL to redshift-jdbc42 to address `CVE-2024-1597 <https://github.com/advisories/GHSA-24rp-q3w6-vc56>`_, `CVE-2022-31197 <https://github.com/advisories/GHSA-r38f-c4h4-hqq2>`_, and `CVE-2020-13692 <https://github.com/advisories/GHSA-88cc-g835-76rp>`_. `#25106 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25106>`_
 * Change checkQueryIntegrity function signature in AccessControl interface to pass in view definitions as params. `#24955 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24955>`_
 * Upgrade netty version to 4.1.119.Final. `#24971 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24971>`_
-* Upgrade okio-jvm version to 3.9.1. `#24971 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24971>`_
 
 Prestissimo (Native Execution) Changes
 ______________________________________
 * Fix serialization in batch shuffle to use appropriate sorting keys for each buffer. `#25015 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25015>`_
+* Add type rewrite support for native execution. This feature can be enabled by ``native-execution-type-rewrite-enabled`` configuration property and ``native_execution_type_rewrite_enabled`` session property. `#24916 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24916>`_
 * Add `runtime metrics collection for S3 Filesystem <https://facebookincubator.github.io/velox/monitoring/metrics.html#s3-filesystem>`_. `#24554 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24554>`_
 * Add support for sorted serialization in batch shuffle. `#24953 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24953>`_
 * Add session property ``native_request_data_sizes_max_wait_sec`` for the maximum wait time for exchange long poll requests in seconds. `#24918 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24918>`_
@@ -67,15 +66,15 @@ ______________________________________
 Router Changes
 ______________
 
-* Add support for custom scheduler plugin to the Presto router. `#24439 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24439>`_
+* Add support for custom scheduler plugin in the Presto Router. `#24439 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24439>`_
 * Fix Round Round robin scheduler candidate cluster index, by adding group specific index. `#24580 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24580>`_
 * Add authentication capabilities to Presto router. `#24407 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24407>`_
 * Add coordinator health checks to Presto router. `#24449 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24449>`_
 * Add counter JMX metrics to Presto router. `#24449 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24449>`_
-* Remove unused line of code from router module. `#25150 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25150>`_
 
 Security Changes
 ________________
+* Fix the issue of sensitive data such as passwords and access keys being exposed in logs by redacting sensitive field values. `#24886 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24886>`_
 * Add security-related headers to the static resources served from the Presto Router UI, including: ``Content-Security-Policy``, ``X-Content-Type-Options``. See reference docs `Content-Security-Policy <https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTTP/CSP>`_ and  `X-Content-Type-Options <https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/previous-versions/windows/internet-explorer/ie-developer/compatibility/gg622941(v=vs.85)>`_. `#25165 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25165>`_
 * Add support for access control row filters and column masks on views. `#25052 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/25052>`_
 * Add support for row filtering and column masking in access control. `#24277 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24277>`_
@@ -90,7 +89,7 @@ ________________
 Web UI Changes
 ______________
 
-* Add a display for number of queued queries for each Resource Group subgroup in the UI. `#24830 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24830>`_
+* Add a display for number of queued and running queries for each Resource Group subgroup in the UI. `#24830 <https://github.com/prestodb/presto/pull/24830>`_
 
 Delta Lake Connector Changes
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