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Author: ben

book/B-embedding-git/sections/libgit2.asc

@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ commit = repo.lookup(commit_id) # <8>
 <7> Rugged (and Libgit2) can optionally update a reference when making a commit.
 <8> The return value is the SHA-1 hash of a new commit object, which you can then use to get a `Commit` object.
 
-The Ruby code is pretty clean, but since Libgit2 is doing the heavy lifting, this code will run pretty fast, too.
+The Ruby code is nice and clean, but since Libgit2 is doing the heavy lifting, this code will run pretty fast, too.
 
 
 ==== Advanced Functionality
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ error = git_odb_backend_mine(&my_backend, repo, …); // <3>
 error = git_odb_add_backendodb, my_backend, 1); // <4>
 ----
 
-_Note that error handling has been elided for this example. You should know better._
+_Note that error handling has been left out for this example. You should know better._
 
 <1> Initialize an empty object database (ODB) ``frontend,'' which will act as a handle to the real ODB.
 <2> Construct a `git_repository` around the empty ODB.
@@ -142,10 +142,6 @@ _Note that error handling has been elided for this example. You should know bett
 
 // TODO
 
-==== What Libgit2 Can't Do
-
-// TODO
-
 ==== Other Bindings
 
 Libgit2 has bindings for many languages.