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Author: HonkingGoose

book/03-git-branching/sections/branch-management.asc

@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ This makes the renamed branch available on the remote.
 $ git push --set-upstream origin main
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-Now we end up with the following state of the repository:
+Now we end up with the following state::
 
 [source,console]
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@@ -163,10 +163,10 @@ git branch --all
   remotes/origin/master
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-Your local _master_ branch is replace with the _main_ branch.
-Your _main_ branch is also available on the remote.
-The remote still has a _master_ branch.
-Other collaborators will continue to use the _master_ branch until you make some further changes.
+Your local _master_ branch is gone, as it's replaced with the _main_ branch.
+The _main_ branch is also available on the remote.
+But the remote still has a _master_ branch.
+Other collaborators will continue to use the _master_ branch as the base of their work, until you make some further changes.
 
 Now you have a few more tasks in front of you to complete the transition:
 * Project dependency update helper configuration files.