minor modifications

Author: aollier

book/09-git-and-other-scms/sections/client-bzr.asc

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ $ git clone bzr::bzr+ssh://developer@mybazaarserver:myproject myProject-Git
 $ cd myProject-Git
 ----
 
-At this point, your Git repository is created but it is not optimized at the point of view of its disk size.
+At this point, your Git repository is created but it is not compacted for optimal disk use.
 That's why you should also clean and compact your Git repository, especially if it is a big one:
 [source,console]
 ----
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ $ git pull --rebase origin
 
 ===== Push your work on the remote repository
 
-Because Bazaar supports very well merge commits, there will be no problem if you push a merge commit.
+Because Bazaar also has the concept of merge commits, there will be no problem if you push a merge commit.
 So you can work on a branch, merge the changes into `master` and push your work.
 Then, you create your branches, you test and commit your work as usual.
 You finally push your work to the Bazaar repository:
@@ -102,7 +102,8 @@ $ git push origin master
 
 ===== Caveats
 
-Limitations of the remote-helpers' framework apply. In particular, these commands don't work:
+Git's remote-helpers framework has some limitations that apply.
+In particular, these commands don't work:
 
 * git push origin :branch-to-delete (Bazaar can't accept ref deletions in this way.)
 * git push origin old:new (it will push 'old')

book/09-git-and-other-scms/sections/import-bzr.asc

@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ To accomplish this, you'll need to import the `bzr-fastimport` plugin.
 
 ===== Getting the bzr-fastimport plugin
 
-According to you are using a UNIX-like operating system or Windows, the procedure differs.
-If you are using a UNIX-like operating system, the simplest is to install the `bzr-fastimport` package that will install all the required dependencies.
+The procedure for installing the fastimport plugin is different on UNIX-like operating systems and on Windows.
+In the first case, the simplest is to install the `bzr-fastimport` package that will install all the required dependencies.
 
 For example, with Debian and derived, you would do the following:
 [source,console]
@@ -50,12 +50,12 @@ $ pip install fastimport
 ----
 If it is not available, you can download it at address https://pypi.python.org/pypi/fastimport/.
 
-With Windows, `bzr-fastimport` is automatically installed with the standalone version and the default installation (let all the checkboxes checked).
+In the second case (on Windows), `bzr-fastimport` is automatically installed with the standalone version and the default installation (let all the checkboxes checked).
 So in this case you have nothing to do.
 
 At this point, the way to import a Bazaar repository differs according to that you have a single branch or you are working with a repository that has several branches.
 
-===== Case of a project with a single branch
+===== Project with a single branch
 
 Now `cd` in the directory that contains your Bazaar repository and initialize the Git repository:
 [source,console]