Rephrased according ben's proposal

Author: mkarg

book/09-git-and-other-scms/sections/import-svn.asc

@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ $ rm -Rf .git/refs/remotes
 
 Now all the old branches are real Git branches and all the old tags are real Git tags.
 
-Unfortunately `git svn` creates one extra branch named `trunk` for svn's trunk, which is essentially the same as the already created `master` branch (it actually refers to the same commit). Hence, let's remove this doublet:
+There's one last thing to clean up. Unfortunately, git svn creates an extra branch named trunk, which maps to Subversion's default branch, but the trunk ref points to the same place as master. Since master is more idiomatically Git, here's how to remove the extra branch:
 
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