rewording as per Ben's recommendation

Author: aollier

book/09-git-and-other-scms/sections/client-bzr.asc

@@ -82,14 +82,12 @@ Bazaar uses the same model as Git to ignore files, but also has two features whi
 The complete description may be found in http://doc.bazaar.canonical.com/bzr.2.7/en/user-reference/ignore-help.html[the documentation].
 The two features are:
 
-1. "!!" at the beginning of a character string takes prevail on "!" at the beginning of the string, which allows to ignore some files that would have been included with "!"
-2. character strings starting with "RE:".
-What follows "RE:" is a http://doc.bazaar.canonical.com/bzr.2.7/en/user-reference/patterns-help.html[regular expression].
-Git does not allow the use of regular expressions, only shell globs.
+1. "!!" allows you to ignore certain file patterns even if they're specified using a "!" rule.
+2. "RE:" at the beginning of a line allows you to specify a https://docs.python.org/3/library/re.html[Python regular expression] (Git only allows shell globs).
 
 As a consequence, there are two different situations to consider:
 
-1. If the `.bzrignore` file does not contain any of these two specific prefixes, then you can simply make a symbolic link to it in the repository.
+1. If the `.bzrignore` file does not contain any of these two specific prefixes, then you can simply make a symbolic link to it in the repository: `ln -s .bzrignore .git/info/exclude`
 2. Otherwise, you must create the `.git/info/exclude` file and adapt it to ignore exactly the same files in `.bzrignore`.
 
 Whatever the case is, you will have to remain vigilant against any change of `.bzrignore` to make sure that the `.git/info/exclude` file always reflects `.bzrignore`.

book/09-git-and-other-scms/sections/import-bzr.asc

@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ $ git reset --hard HEAD
 
 Now let's have a look at the files to ignore.
 The first thing to do is to rename `.bzrignore` into `.gitignore`.
-Moreover, if the `.bzrignore` file contains one or several lines starting with "!!" or "RE:", you'll have to modify it and perhaps create several `.gitignore` files in order to ignore exactly the same files that `.bzrignore` allowed.
+If the `.bzrignore` file contains one or several lines starting with "!!" or "RE:", you'll have to modify it and perhaps create several `.gitignore` files in order to ignore exactly the same files that Bazaar was ignoring.
 
 Finally, you will have to create a commit that contains this modification for the migration: