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 So, scratch that. There **was** a whole lot of magic happening. Everyone involved spread their unique mix of fairy dust on whatever they took on, from blog posts, to tweeting, to finding sponsors, and gathering conference tickets, to answering queries on the helpdesk in the middle of the night.
 
 It’s this spirit of working together as a community that reminds us why we make RGSoC happen. All of you are the magical spark who made this fairy tale come true again.
-Emma Watson put it very eloquently in her speech for the launch of the ally-campaign #HeforShe a few weeks ago: *“If not me, then who? If not now, then when?”*
 
-Because all the people behind RGSoC said *"It's going to be me."* they deserve no less than a standing ovation. Each and every one of them.
+Emma Watson made a very eloquent and timely observation in her speech for the launch of the ally-campaign, #HeforShe, a few weeks ago; “If not me, then who? If not now, then when?”
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+To everyone who said *"It's going to be me."* - to supporting RGSoC, to supporting more women and more diversity in Open Source - you deserve no less than a standing ovation. You are our heroes and heroines, and have made it clear the sort of place you want the Open Source community to be.
 
 ### 32 new beginnings
 
-With the help of the wonderful community we raised $95 k, and with that money we were able to provide sponsorship to 10 teams - that's 20 participants. We also had 6 amazing volunteer teams this year, wich takes us to 32 students in total.  [32 stories to tell](http://teams.railsgirlssummerofcode.org/), 32 new beginnings.
+With the help of the wonderful community we raised $95 k, and with that money we were able to provide sponsorship to 10 teams - that's 20 participants. We also had 6 amazing volunteer teams this year, wich brings us to 32 students in total.  [32 stories to tell](http://teams.railsgirlssummerofcode.org/), 32 new beginnings.
 
 The teams worked on projects such as Rubinius, Spree, Bundler, Diaspora*, BrowserSpree CMS, Speakerinnen, Species+, created a tool for documentation testing or started a migraine tracker - to only name a few. Meet the teams here: [http://teams.railsgirlssummerofcode.org/teams](http://teams.railsgirlssummerofcode.org/teams).
 
 
 ### Something to remember the summer
 
-To fight against a possible post-summer-of-code-blues, we began to create a Mixtape dedicated to this year's RGSoC. And we want your song to be on it. Which song made your summer? Just [tweet to us](https://twitter.com/railsgirlssoc) the link to your song on [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com) and it's going to be part of this mixtape. 
+To fight any post-summer-of-code-blues, we began to creating a mixtape dedicated to this year's RGSoC, and we want your song to be on it! Which song made your summer? Just [tweet to us](https://twitter.com/railsgirlssoc) with the link to the song on [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com) and we will make it a part of the mixtape.
 
 [https://soundcloud.com/railsgirlssummerofcode/sets/rails-girls-summer-of-code](https://soundcloud.com/railsgirlssummerofcode/sets/rails-girls-summer-of-code)