Updates from Andrew review!

Author: katshann-raspberry

documentation/asciidoc/computers/remote-access/ssh.adoc

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 ==== Forward X11 over SSH
 
-NOTE: On Raspberry Pi 4 and 5, Raspberry Pi OS Bookworm and later use the Wayland window server by default. You can only forward X11 if you use the X window server. To enable window forwarding over X11, switch your desktop to the X window server in Control Centre or the Raspberry Pi configuration CLI.
+NOTE: Raspberry Pi OS uses the Wayland window server by default. You can only forward X11 if you use the X window server. To enable window forwarding over X11, switch your desktop to the X window server in Control Centre or the Raspberry Pi configuration CLI.
 
 NOTE: X11 is no longer installed by default on many desktop environments. Install a third-party X server such as https://www.xquartz.org/[XQuartz] to use X11 forwarding.
 

documentation/asciidoc/services/connect/introduction.adoc

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 Connect is installed by default in Raspberry Pi OS Desktop and Raspberry Pi OS Full (desktop with recommended software). Raspberry Pi OS Lite doesn't include Connect by default, but you can xref:connect.adoc#install-connect-lite[install Connect Lite].
 
-To use Connect, xref:connect.adoc#link-connect[link your device with an account] on your Raspberry Pi. Visit https://connect.raspberrypi.com[connect.raspberrypi.com] to access the desktop or a shell running on your Raspberry Pi in a browser window.
+To use Connect, xref:connect.adoc#link-connect[link your device with a Connect account]. Visit https://connect.raspberrypi.com[connect.raspberrypi.com] to access the desktop or a shell running on your Raspberry Pi in a browser window.
 
 Connect uses a secure, encrypted connection. By default, Connect communicates directly between your Raspberry Pi and your browser. However, when Connect can't establish a direct connection between your Raspberry Pi and your browser, we use a relay server. In such cases, Raspberry Pi only retains the metadata required to operate Connect.