Post final-qa fixes

Author: bzaczynski

python-nested-loops/clock_analogy.py

@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
-for hour in range(0, 3):
+for hour in range(0, 24):
     for minute in range(0, 60):
         print(f"{hour:02d}:{minute:02d}")

python-nested-loops/duplicate_check1.py

@@ -2,4 +2,4 @@
 for i, first_id in enumerate(crew_ids):
     for second_id in crew_ids[i + 1 :]:
         if first_id == second_id:
-            print(f"Clone detected: id {first_id} is a duplicate.")
+            print(f"Clone found: id={first_id} is a duplicate.")

python-nested-loops/duplicate_check2.py

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 crew_ids = [1, 2, 8, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10]
 detected = set()
-for id in crew_ids:
-    if id in detected:
-        print(f"Clone found: id {id} is a duplicate.")
+for crew_id in crew_ids:
+    if crew_id in detected:
+        print(f"Clone found: id={crew_id} is a duplicate.")
     else:
-        detected.add(id)
+        detected.add(crew_id)

python-nested-loops/duplicate_check3.py

@@ -4,4 +4,4 @@
 detected = Counter(crew_ids)
 for key, value in detected.items():
     if value > 1:
-        print(f"Clone found: id {key} is a duplicate.")
+        print(f"Clone found: id={key} is a duplicate.")

python-nested-loops/multilist_sum.py

@@ -3,4 +3,5 @@
 for planet in resource_donators:
     for resource in planet:
         total_resources += resource
-print(f"Total resources gotten for interstellar travels: {total_resources}")
+
+print(f"All resources gathered for interstellar travels: {total_resources}")

python-nested-loops/pancake1.py

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-pancake_stacks = []
 bases = ["plain", "chocolate", "blueberry"]
 toppings = ["honey", "whipped cream", "alien syrup"]
-
+pancake_stacks = []
 for base in bases:
     for topping in toppings:
         pancake_stacks.append(f"{base.capitalize()} pancake with {topping}")
+
 print(pancake_stacks)

python-nested-loops/pancake2.py

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 bases = ["plain", "chocolate", "blueberry"]
 toppings = ["honey", "whipped cream", "alien syrup"]
-
 pancake_stacks = [
     f"{base.capitalize()} pancake with {topping}"
     for base in bases

python-nested-loops/readability_challenge.py

@@ -6,6 +6,6 @@
     for section in range(sections):
         for living_quarter in range(living_quarters):
             print(
-                f"Scanning quarter {living_quarter} in section {section} "
-                f"on floor {floor} for the intruder..."
+                f"Scanning quarter {living_quarter} in section {section}"
+                f" on floor {floor} for the intruder..."
             )

python-nested-loops/sandwich1.py

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
             print(f"Found the crispy {target}!")
             found = True
             break
+
     if found:
         print("Enjoying the crunch and worth it.")
         break

python-nested-loops/sandwich2.py

@@ -15,5 +15,5 @@
         break
 
     if found:
+        print("Enjoying the crunch and worth it.")
         break
-print("Enjoying the crunch and worth it.")