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Author: rm3l

modules/admin/procedure-understanding-no-proxy.adoc

@@ -12,15 +12,15 @@ Matching follows the rules below:
 
 * `NO_PROXY=*` will bypass the proxy for all requests.
 
-* You may use space and commas may to separate the entries in the `NO_PROXY` list. For example, `NO_PROXY=localhost,example.com`, `NO_PROXY="localhost example.com"`, or `NO_PROXY="localhost, example.com"` would have the same effect.
+* You may use space and commas to separate the entries in the `NO_PROXY` list. For example, `NO_PROXY=localhost,example.com`, `NO_PROXY="localhost example.com"`, or `NO_PROXY="localhost, example.com"` would have the same effect.
 
-* If `NO_PROXY` contains no entries, configuring the `HTTP(S)_PROXY` settings will make the Backend send all requests through the proxy. Otherwise, it fetches requests directly.
+* If `NO_PROXY` contains no entries, configuring the `HTTP(S)_PROXY` settings will make the Backend send all requests through the proxy.
 
 * The Backend does not perform a DNS lookup to determine if a request should bypass the proxy or not. For example, if DNS is known to resolve `example.com` to `1.2.3.4`, setting `NO_PROXY=1.2.3.4` will not have any effect on requests sent to `example.com`. Only requests sent to the IP address `1.2.3.4` will bypass the proxy.
 
 * If a port is added after the hostname or IP Address, then the input request must match both the host/IP and port in order to bypass the proxy. For example, `NO_PROXY=example.com:1234` would bypass the proxy for requests to `http(s)://example.com:1234`, but not for requests on other ports, like `http(s)://example.com`.
 
-* If no port is specified after the hostname or IP address, all requests to that host/IP address will bypass the proxy regardless of the port. For example, `NO_PROXY=localhost` would exclude all requests sent to `localhost` (so calling them directly), like `http(s)://localhost:7077` and `http(s)://localhost:8888`.
+* If no port is specified after the hostname or IP address, all requests to that host/IP address will bypass the proxy regardless of the port. For example, `NO_PROXY=localhost` would bypass the proxy for requests sent to URLs like `http(s)://localhost:7077` and `http(s)://localhost:8888`.
 
 * IP Address blocks in CIDR notation will not work. So setting `NO_PROXY=10.11.0.0/16` will not have any effect, even if the Backend sends a request to an IP address in that block.