Incorporated Ben's comments

Author: pabel-rh

modules/openshift-ai-connector-for-rhdh/proc-setting-up-openshift-ai-connector-for-rhdh-with-rhoai.adoc

@@ -14,9 +14,10 @@ The installation of the {openshift-ai-connector-name} requires manual updates to
 If you upgraded to {rhoai-short} 2.25 from an earlier version, you must manually enable the model catalog dashboard and model registry before you can import model cards.
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-* If you employed model catalog at earlier versions of {rhoai-short}, TechDocs propagation does not work for any models you registered into the model registry while at those earlier versions; only models registered into model registry from a {rhoai-short} 2.25 model catalog have their model cards transferred to {product-very-short} as TechDocs.
+* If you used the model catalog in earlier versions of {rhoai-short}, TechDocs propagation does not work for any models you registered into the model registry while at those earlier versions; only models registered into model registry from a {rhoai-short} 2.25 model catalog have their model cards transferred to {product-very-short} as TechDocs.
 
 * For the rest of the features, version 2.20 or later suffices. Enabling model registry and its associated dashboard allows for a user experience that more directly allows for customizing AI Model metadata.
+For best overall experience, {rhoai-short} 2.25 is recommended.
 
 For more details, see link:https://docs.redhat.com/en/documentation/red_hat_openshift_ai_self-managed/2.25/html-single/enabling_the_model_registry_component/index[Enabling the model registry component].
 
@@ -43,7 +44,7 @@ plugins:
     package: oci://ghcr.io/redhat-developer/rhdh-plugin-export-overlays/red-hat-developer-hub-backstage-plugin-catalog-techdoc-url-reader-backend:bs_1.42.5__0.3.0!red-hat-developer-hub-backstage-plugin-catalog-techdoc-url-reader-backend
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-. Add `Connector` sidecar containers to the {product-very-short} Pod.
+. Add the `Connector` sidecar containers to the {product-very-short} Pod.
 ** If {product-very-short} was installed using the Operator, modify your {product-very-short} custom resource (CR) instance.
 ** If {product-very-short} was installed using the Helm charts, modify the *Deployment* specification.
 

modules/openshift-ai-connector-for-rhdh/ref-out-of-the-box-details-from-rhoai.adoc

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 :_mod-docs-content-type: REFERENCE
 
 [id="ref-out-of-the-box-details-from-rhoai_{context}"]
-= Out-of-the-Box details from {rhoai-short}
+= Out-of-the-Box as asset details synched from {rhoai-short}
 
 The connector propagates the following key data: