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Co-authored-by: andy-stark-redis <[email protected]>

Author: rrelledge

content/operate/rs/release-notes/rs-6-4-2-releases/rs-6-4-2-115.md

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ socket permissions on startup. (Redis 6.2.14)
 
 - (CVE-2023-22458) Integer overflow in the Redis `HRANDFIELD` and `ZRANDMEMBER` commands can lead to denial-of-service. (Redis 6.2.9)
 
-- (CVE-2022-36021) String matching commands (like `SCAN` or `KEYS`) with a specially crafted pattern to trigger a denial-of-service attack on Redis, causing it to hang and consume 100% CPU time. (Redis 6.2.11)
+- (CVE-2022-36021) String matching commands (like `SCAN` or `KEYS`) with a specially crafted pattern to trigger a denial-of-service attack on Redis, can cause it to hang and consume 100% CPU time. (Redis 6.2.11)
 
 - (CVE-2022-35977) Integer overflow in the Redis `SETRANGE` and `SORT`/`SORT_RO` commands can drive Redis to OOM panic. (Redis 6.2.9)
 
@@ -120,9 +120,9 @@ socket permissions on startup. (Redis 6.2.14)
 
 - (CVE-2022-24735) By exploiting weaknesses in the Lua script execution environment, an attacker with access to Redis can inject Lua code that will execute with the (potentially higher) privileges of another Redis user. (Redis 6.2.7)
 
-- (CVE-2021-41099) Integer to heap buffer overflow handling certain string commands and network payloads, when `proto-max-bulk-len` is manually configured to a non-default, very large value. (Redis 6.2.6)
+- (CVE-2021-41099) Integer to heap buffer overflow can occur when handling certain string commands and network payloads, when `proto-max-bulk-len` is manually configured to a non-default, very large value. (Redis 6.2.6)
 
-- (CVE-2021-32762) Integer to heap buffer overflow issue in `redis-cli` and `redis-sentinel` parsing large multi-bulk replies on some older and less common platforms. (Redis 6.2.6)
+- (CVE-2021-32762) Integer to heap buffer overflow issue in `redis-cli` and `redis-sentinel` can occur when parsing large multi-bulk replies on some older and less common platforms. (Redis 6.2.6)
 
 - (CVE-2021-32761) An integer overflow bug in Redis version 2.2 or newer can be exploited using the `BITFIELD` command to corrupt the heap and potentially result with remote code execution. (Redis 6.2.5)