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Author: cmilesb

content/operate/rc/changelog/june-2025.md

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 ### Faster scaling with Redis hashing policy
 
-Starting June DATE, 2025, new Redis Cloud accounts can create databases that scale faster. This makes resharding operations up to 40% faster than before.
+Starting June 24, 2025, new Redis Cloud accounts can create databases that scale faster. This makes resharding operations up to 40% faster than before.
 
 Faster scaling requires:
-- A new Redis cloud account, created after June DATE, 2025
+- A new Redis cloud account, created after June 24, 2025
 - A new database running Redis 7.4 or later, with the [Redis hashing policy]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/configuration/clustering#redis-hashing-policy" >}}) selected
 
 For these databases, this enhancement is enabled automatically, ensuring that all future resharding operations complete faster than ever.