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Co-authored-by: andy-stark-redis <[email protected]>

Author: cmilesb

content/operate/rc/databases/active-active/manage-regions.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ categories:
 - docs
 - operate
 - rc
-description: Shows how to add and edit regions for an Active-Active deployment.
+description: Learn how to add and edit regions for an Active-Active deployment.
 linkTitle: Manage regions
 weight: 10
 ---

content/operate/rc/databases/configuration/sizing.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Here are some general guidelines:
 
 - [Replication]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/configuration/high-availability" >}}) doubles memory consumption; that is, 512 MB of data requires at least 1 GB of memory limit when replication is enabled. This affects both Redis Cloud Pro and Redis Cloud Essentials. For example, if you subscribe to a 1 GB Essentials plan, Redis will allocate 512 MB for your dataset and the other 512 MB for replication.
 
-- [Active-Active]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/active-active" >}}) also doubles memory consumption and the effect is cumulative with replication's impact. Since Active-Active requires replication to be turned on, the memory limit impact can be as large as four times (4x) the original data size.
+- [Active-Active]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/active-active" >}}) also doubles memory consumption and the effect is cumulative with the impact of replication. Since Active-Active requires replication to be turned on, the memory limit impact can be as large as four times (4x) the original data size.
 
 - [Advanced capabilities]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/configuration/advanced-capabilities" >}}) also consume memory. For search databases, consider index size when you size your database. See [Search and query sizing]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/configuration/advanced-capabilities#search-and-query-sizing" >}}) for more info.
 

content/operate/rc/databases/connect/_index.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Once you have the username and password, select **Connect** to open the connecti
 {{< image filename="/images/rc/button-connect.png#no-click" alt="Connect button." >}}
 
 {{< note >}}
-For [Active-Active databases]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/active-active" >}}), you connect to one of the database instances. Select the region you to connect to from the region selection to access the connection information for that instance.
+For [Active-Active databases]({{< relref "/operate/rc/databases/active-active" >}}), you connect to one of the database instances. Choose the region you want to connect to from the region selection to access the connection information for that instance.
 {{< /note >}}
 
 The connection wizard provides the following database connection methods: