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fix(story): fix grammar in bar
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game/story/bar.rpy

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"And yet,{w=0.1} here he is."
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"Sitting across from me in this nearly empty lounge,{w=0.1} grinning like we were old buddies."
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"He even did it without asking like it was the most natural thing."
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"He even did it without asking,{w=0.1} like it was the most natural thing to do."
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pause 0.5
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ryohei "Looking splendid,{w=0.1} as always!"
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"I couldn’t help but smile back."
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"I’m not sure if I’m most amused by his outlandish teasing,{w=0.2} or by the fact that he remembered my name."
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"I’m not sure if I’m amused by his outlandish teasing,{w=0.2} or by the fact that he remembered my name."
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eden "I don’t think lounging at a jazz club after an exhausting day is much of a splendid look,{w=0.2} but {cps=15}thanks...?"
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eden "You look like...{w=0.3} life’s been treating you well."
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"And for the first time in what felt like forever..."
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"I didn’t feel like a complete failure."
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"We caught up and talked for a while."
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"Something about his presence...{w=0.2} felt almost too welcoming."
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"Something about his presence{cps=15}...{/cps}{w=0.3} felt almost too welcoming."
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"Made it easy for me to open up."
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"It felt safe,{w=0.1} or at least I convinced myself it was."
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"After all,{w=0.1} he was an old acquaintance,{w=0.1} wasn’t he?"
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"So, like an idiot,{w=0.1} I spilled everything."
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"It felt safe,{w=0.2} or at least I convinced myself it was."
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"After all,{w=0.2} he was an old acquaintance,{w=0.1} wasn’t he?"
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"So, like an idiot,{w=0.2} I spilled everything."
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"He listened intently."
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voice "voice/ryohei/oh.ogg"
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eden "{cps=10}Oh."
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"It’ll probably be in vain,{w=0.2} but declining now that he seems so willing to help would make an even more pitiful sight."
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"Since he seems so willing to help,{w=0.2} declining now would make me look even more pitiful."
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pause 0.5
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play sound rustle
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"Before I could react,{w=0.1} he produced a card between his fingers,{w=0.1} like it had been waiting there all along."
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ryohei "Come to my studio whenever you’re ready,{w=0.2} no pressure."
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game/story/sessions/session2.rpy

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"Inside,{w=0.2} nestled in black satin,{w=0.1} were seven unlit candles of varying heights."
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ryohei seated smile "Let’s play a game,{w=0.2} Eden."
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ryohei seated neutral "This is a “focusing exercise.”"
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ryohei seated neutral "This is a “focusing exercise”."
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play sound "sfx/light.ogg"
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"He lit the candles and set them on the table in a chaotic line."

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