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Author: paigecalvert

docs/intro-replicated.mdx

@@ -57,9 +57,7 @@ For more information, see [Using Embedded Cluster](/vendor/embedded-overview).
 
 KOTS is a kubectl plugin and in-cluster Admin Console that installs Kubernetes applications in customer-controlled environments.
 
-KOTS is used by [Replicated Embedded Cluster](#embedded-cluster) to deploy applications and also to provide the Admin Console UI where users can manage both the application and the cluster. Embedded Cluster automatically installs KOTS during installation. 
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-KOTS can also be used to install applications in existing Kubernetes clusters in customer-controlled environments, including clusters in air-gapped environments with limited or no outbound internet access.
+KOTS is used by [Replicated Embedded Cluster](#embedded-cluster) to deploy applications and also to provide the Admin Console UI where users can manage both the application and the cluster. KOTS can also be used to install applications in existing Kubernetes clusters in customer-controlled environments, including clusters in air-gapped environments with limited or no outbound internet access.
 
 For more information, see [Introduction to KOTS](intro-kots).
 
@@ -147,7 +145,7 @@ For more information about working with customers and custom license fields, see
 
 ### Install
 
-Applications distributed with the Replicated Platform can support multiple different installation methods from the same application release, helping you to meet your customers where they are:
+Applications distributed with the Replicated Platform can support multiple different installation methods from the same application release, helping you to meet your customers where they are. For example:
 
 * Customers who are not experienced with Kubernetes or who prefer to deploy to a dedicated cluster in their environment can install on a VM or bare metal server with the Replicated Embedded Cluster installer. For more information, see [Using Embedded Cluster](/vendor/embedded-overview).
 * Customers familiar with Kubernetes and Helm can install in their own existing cluster using Helm. For more information, see [Installing with Helm](/vendor/install-with-helm).