Update rn-vendor-platform.md

Author: paigecalvert

docs/release-notes/rn-vendor-platform.md

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 Released on January 30, 2025
 
 ### New Features {#new-features-v2025-01-30-0}
-* Adds a link to download Embedded Cluster installer assets in the Download Portal.
+* Adds a link to download Embedded Cluster installation assets in the Download Portal.
 * Adds a button to log out of the Download Portal.
 
 ### Bug Fixes {#bug-fixes-v2025-01-30-0}
-* Fixes bug that would prevent demoting a channel release when it was the only release in the channel.
-* Fixes bug that could have marked the wrong release as active, if a demoted channels semantic version was reused by multiple releases in that channel.
+* Fixes a bug that would prevent demoting a channel release when it was the only release on the channel.
+* Fixes a bug that could have marked the wrong release as active if the semantic version for a demoted release was reused by multiple releases on the given channel.
 
 ## v2025.01.29-4