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Author: eformat

docs/slides/content/open-practice-library.md

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 #### How do we use it?
-The Open Practice Library uses the Mobius Loop model, on a foundation of Culture and Technology, to navigate between an evolving number of open practices.<!--{.element: style="font-size: smaller; font-weight: 100;"} -->
+The Open Practice Library uses the Mobius Loop model, built on a foundation of Culture and Technology, to navigate between an evolving number of open practices.<!--{.element: style="font-size: smaller; font-weight: 100;"} -->
 
 ![Open Practice Library](images/opl/mobius-loop-dark.png)
 
-It is an iterative process model for rapidly developing digital products<!--{.element: style="font-size: smaller; font-weight: 100;"} -->
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-<!--TechEditor: the "it" as the subject is ambiguous, it could refer to the OPL or the Mobius Loop. I think you mean the ML? "The Mobius Loop is an interative process model..."-->
+The Mobius Loop is an continuous process model for rapidly developing digital products<!--{.element: style="font-size: smaller; font-weight: 100;"} -->
 
 [Mobius Loop Site](https://www.mobiusloop.com/)<!--{.element: style="font-size: smaller; font-weight: 100;"} -->