Community

Author: cielf

docs/user_guide/bank/community_donation_sites.md

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+READY FOR REVIEW
 # Donation Sites
 
-Donation sites are places where people drop off donations. 
+Donation Sites are places where people drop off Donations. 
 
-## The donation site list
+## The Donation Site list
 You can manage the sites' information on the "Donation Sites" page under the "Community" section. 
 
 ![Donation Sites](images/community/donation_sites/donation_sites.jpg)
 
-Previously recorded information about donation sites appears on this page including the name of the donation site name, address, contact name, e-mail and phone number.
+Previously recorded information about Donation Sites appears on this page including the name of the Donation Site name, address, contact name, e-mail and phone number.
 
 ### Adding a Donation Site
 
-Create a new site by populating the donation site, address, contact name, e-mail and phone fields and clicking the "Create" button. 
+Create a new site by populating the Donation Site, address, contact name, e-mail and phone fields and clicking the "Create" button. 
 
 ![Create Donation_Site](images/community/donation_sites/create_donation_site.jpg)
 
-Note that the donation site and address fields are mandatory while the contact name, email and phone are optional.
+Note that the Donation Site and address fields are mandatory while the contact name, email and phone are optional.
 
-You can also use the "+ New Donation Site" button which renders a form for you to fill in details of a new donation site.
+You can also use the "+ New Donation Site" button which renders a form for you to fill in details of a new Donation Site.
 
 
 ![Add Donation_Site](images/community/donation_sites/add_new_donation_site.jpg)
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 ## Viewing Donation Site information
 
-Clicking on the "view" button beside a donation site will show detailed information for that site, including the donation site name, address, contact name, e-mail, phone number, storage location. It also shows a list of the donations for that site including the quantity of items and variety of items. You can drill down to see the full details of each donation by clicking "View donation details".
+Clicking on the "view" button beside a Donation Site will show detailed information for that site, including the Donation Site name, address, contact name, e-mail, phone number, storage location. It also shows a list of the Donations for that site including the quantity of items and variety of items. You can drill down to see the full details of each Donation by clicking "View Donation details".
 
 ![Donation Sites Details](images/community/donation_sites/donation_sites_details.jpg)
 
 ## Editing Donation Site information
 
-Clicking on the "Edit" button beside a donation site in the donation site list lets you edit the name, address, contact name, email and phone number.
+Clicking on the "Edit" button beside a Donation Site in the Donation Site list lets you edit the name, address, contact name, email and phone number.
 
 ![Edit Donation Site Details](images/community/donation_sites/edit_donation_site.jpg)
 
 ## Deactivating a Donation Site
 
-Use the "Deactivate" button to delete information about a donation site that is no longer active.
+Use the "Deactivate" button to hide a Donation Site that is no longer active.
 
 ##### (NB) at time of writing there is no way for you to undo this.
 
 ![Deactivate Donation Sites](images/community/donation_sites/deactivate_donation_site.jpg)
 
 ## Exporting Donation Sites
 
-You can export the active donation sites by clicking on the "Export Donation Sites" button. This will provide a .csv file containing the name, address, and contact information for each active donation site.
+You can export the active Donation Sites by clicking on the "Export Donation Sites" button. This will provide a .csv file containing the name, address, and contact information for each active Donation Site.
 
 ![Export Donation Sites](images/community/donation_sites/export_donation_sites.jpg)
 

docs/user_guide/bank/community_manufacturers.md

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+READY FOR REVIEW
 # Manufacturers
 
-The Manufacturers page under the "Community" section lets you track donations from manufacturers.
+The Manufacturers page under the "Community" section lets you manage your Manufacturers and track donations from them.
 
 ![Manufacturers](images/community/manufacturers/manufacturers_page.jpg)
 
-It shows the name and total items donated by a manufacturer.
+It shows the name and total Items donated by a Manufacturer.
 
 ### Adding a manufacturer
 
-Click on the "+ New Manufacturer" button, to add the manufacturer's name.
+Click on the "+ New Manufacturer" button, to add the Manufacturer's name.
 
 ![New Manufacturer](images/community/manufacturers/new_manufacturer.jpg)
 
-## Viewing manufacturer information
+## Viewing Manufacturer information
 
-Click on "View" for more details about the manufacturer which shows the date of each donation, volume (total items in the donation), and lets you view the full details of each donation.
+Click on "View" for more details about the Manufacturer which shows the date of each donation, volume (total items in the donation), and lets you view the full details of each donation.
 
 ![Manufacturer Details](images/community/manufacturers/manufacturer_details.jpg)
 
 ## Editing manufacturer information
 
-Click the "Edit" button to edit the manufacturer's name.
+Click the "Edit" button to edit the Manufacturer's name.
 
 [Prior: Vendors](community_vendors.md)[Next: Exports](exports.md)