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environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/additional-content/environmental-footprint-calculator.mdx

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ This page details the methodology used to calculate the environmental footprint
 
 Our Methodology is based on the [ADEME Product Category Rules (PCR)](https://librairie.ademe.fr/produire-autrement/6105-methodological-standard-for-the-environmental-assessment-of-datacenter-it-hosting-services-and-cloud-services.html) for Datacenter and Cloud services, which provide a standardized framework for calculating and reporting the environmental impact of datacenters and cloud services. These rules are designed to ensure consistency, transparency, and comparability in the assessment of environmental footprints across the industry.
 
-The ADEME PCR specifies the methodology for conducting Life Cycle Assessments (LCA) for datacenter operations, which includes the evaluation of energy consumption, greenhouse gas emissions, resource usage, and other environmental impacts associated with the lifecycle of datacenter infrastructures and cloud services. This lifecycle covers all stages from raw material extraction, manufacturing, and transportation, to the use and end-of-life disposal of datacenter equipment.
+The ADEME PCR specifies the methodology for conducting [Life Cycle Analysis (LCA)](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/#life-cycle-analysis-lca) for datacenter operations, which includes the evaluation of energy consumption, greenhouse gas emissions, resource usage, and other environmental impacts associated with the lifecycle of datacenter infrastructures and cloud services. This lifecycle covers all stages from raw material extraction, manufacturing, and transportation, to the use and end-of-life disposal of datacenter equipment.
 
 By adhering to PCR guidelines, we provide reliable and standardized environmental impact data. This facilitates better decision-making for both providers and consumers of datacenter and cloud services, as it allows for clear comparisons and informed choices regarding sustainability.
 
@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ By integrating these additional factors into the PCR Datacenter and cloud method
 
 ## Detailed Calculation Breakdown
 
-The final calculation of the environmental impact considers several critical factors to provide a thorough and accurate assessment. This includes considering the manufacturing processes for datacenters and related technical components, network machines, and servers directly used by clients. Additionally, the assessment accounts for servers dedicated to IT tools and those maintained in stock.
+The final calculation of the environmental impact considers several critical factors to provide a thorough and accurate assessment. This includes considering the manufacturing processes for datacenters and related technical components, network machines, and servers directly used by customers. Additionally, the assessment accounts for servers dedicated to IT tools and those maintained in stock.
 
-The usage phase also includes every datacenter Power Usage Effectiveness (PUE), which is multiplied by the impact related to electricity consumption of network servers, client-used servers, and servers used for transversal IT tools. This approach ensures that both the direct and indirect energy consumption associated with datacenter operations is accurately represented.
+The usage phase also includes every datacenter [Power Usage Effectiveness (PUE)](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/#pue-power-usage-effectiveness), which is multiplied by the impact related to electricity consumption of network servers, customer-used servers, and servers used for transversal IT tools. This approach ensures that both the direct and indirect energy consumption associated with datacenter operations is accurately represented.
 
 Furthermore, the calculation will integrate the environmental impact of all elements necessary for the proper functioning of the enterprise. This includes the office premises, employee transportation, and other logistical aspects. 
 
@@ -58,12 +58,12 @@ All calculations will use the following variables:
     The abbreviations used below are based on the French phrases for these terms.
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-- **dU** : duration of use of the equipment included in the study
-- **DDV** : lifespan
-- **PuissEqt** : rated power of the equipment
-- **PuissCommDC** : proportion of the Datacenter's installed power reserved by customers
-- **FE** : emission factor
-- **%mutualisation** : mutualization factor
+- [dU](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/##du-duration-of-use) : duration of use of the equipment included in the study
+- [DDV](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/#ddvdc-datacenter-lifespan) : lifespan
+- [PuissEqt](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/#puisseqt-rated-power) : rated power of the equipment
+- [PuissCommDC](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/#puisscommdc) : proportion of the datacenter's installed power reserved by customers
+- [FE](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/#emission-factor): emission factor
+- [%mutualisation](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/#mutualisation): mutualization factor
 
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   Refer to the [Environmental Footprint concepts page](/environmental-footprint/concepts) for more information about each of the concepts above.
@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@ To allocate the environmental impact of the manufacturing of the datacenter and
 
 ### Network
 
-To calculate the environmental impact of your large-scale use of the products, we include part of the impact of manufacturing the network machines that are necessary for the operation of our products. To do this, we divide the impact of manufacturing network equipment over its entire lifespan and attribute this impact based on the energy consumption of the equipment used in order to assign a proportional share of the environmental impact to each piece of equipment. Finally, we estimate the impact of manufacturing the equipment using the boavizta database.
+To calculate the environmental impact of your large-scale use of the products, we include part of the impact of manufacturing the network machines that are necessary for the operation of our products. To do this, we divide the impact of manufacturing network equipment over its entire lifespan and attribute this impact based on the energy consumption of the equipment used in order to assign a proportional share of the environmental impact to each piece of equipment. Finally, we estimate the impact of manufacturing the equipment using the [boavizta](https://boavizta.org/) database.
 
-For the use of network machines induced by your use of Scaleway products, we take into account the energy consumption of the network machines for one hour and multiply it by the emission factor linked to the production of this energy that we recover thanks to the EMBER database. We then attribute this share of impact to each machine according to its energy consumption.
+For the use of network machines induced by your use of Scaleway products, we take into account the energy consumption of the network machines and multiply it by the emission factor linked to the production of this energy that we recover thanks to the [EMBER database](https://ember-climate.org/). We then attribute this share of impact to each machine according to its energy consumption.
 
 
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@@ -95,43 +95,18 @@ To accurately calculate the environmental impact of each server used directly fo
 
 Each product will have its own set of criteria to allocate the environmental footprint, considering factors such as server utilization rates, operational timeframes, and the specific technical requirements of the product. By customizing the allocation rules for each offering, we can ensure a more accurate and fair representation of the environmental impact associated with each product.
 
-### Bare Metal
+#### Bare Metal
 
 For bare metal servers, the allocation of environmental impact is straightforward due to the direct association between a user and a server. The environmental impact of a bare metal server is entirely attributed to the user utilizing it. This encompasses the energy consumption during its operation, as well as a portion of the impact from the server's manufacturing process.
 
-The manufacturing impact is prorated based on the server's lifespan and the duration of its use by the client. By dividing the total manufacturing impact by the expected lifetime of the server and then allocating it according to the specific usage period, we ensure that each user is accountable for their fair share of the server's overall environmental footprint.
+The manufacturing impact is prorated based on the server's lifespan and the duration of its use by the customer. By dividing the total manufacturing impact by the expected lifetime of the server and then allocating it according to the specific usage period, we ensure that each user is accountable for their fair share of the server's overall environmental footprint.
 
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 ### Cross-IT Equipment & stock
 
-Our calculation will also incorporate the environmental footprint of all transversal tools essential for the functioning of the Scaleway, such as: 
-
-- Account
-- API Gateway
-- Billing
-- Customers success
-- Hardware
-- Helpdesk
-- IAM
-- Internal services
-- IT Data Automation
-- Payment
-- Platform hardware orchestration
-- Platform Managed services
-- Platform observability
-- Security
-- Tooling
-- Internal Databases
-- Front development
-- Devtools
-- Event Buses
-- Product catalog
-- Website development
-- Production Incidents
-- Production operations
-- The Environmental Footprint tool itself
+Our calculation will also incorporate the environmental footprint of all transversal tools essential for the functioning of the Scaleway.
 
 For Dedibox, only the following tools are considered: 
 
@@ -147,7 +122,7 @@ For Dedibox, only the following tools are considered: 
 
 The elements listed above encompass a comprehensive list of resources that support various internal operations and services. 
 
-To determine their manufacturing impact, we add the environmental footprint of each machine hosting these transversal tools over the duration of client usage. This aggregated impact will then be divided by the total number of clients. A "customer" is defined as an active organization, that is to say an organization which consumes and which is billed.
+To determine their manufacturing impact, we add the environmental footprint of each machine hosting these transversal tools over the duration of customer usage. This aggregated impact will then be divided by the total number of customers. A "customer" is defined as an active organization, that is to say an organization which consumes and which is billed.
 
 To determine stock manufacturing impact, we will divide the sum of the impact of all hardware components in stock by the total number of servers. 
 
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 Finally, our comprehensive environmental impact calculation will include the "Non-IT cross-functional elements." This category encompasses the environmental footprint of all other essential components required for Scaleway's operations, such as office facilities, employee transportation, the company cafeteria, and various logistical aspects.
 
-To integrate this into the overall calculation, we will first get the total environmental impact of these non-IT elements from Scaleway Impact report. This total impact will then be divided by the number of clients. This approach ensures that every client shares a portion of the environmental burden associated with maintaining the broader operational infrastructure, thereby providing a complete and transparent picture of Scaleway's environmental footprint.
+To integrate this into the overall calculation, we will first get the total environmental impact of these non-IT elements from Scaleway Impact report. This total impact will then be divided by the number of customers. This approach ensures that every customer shares a portion of the environmental burden associated with maintaining the broader operational infrastructure, thereby providing a complete and transparent picture of Scaleway's environmental footprint.
 
 
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@@ -168,7 +143,7 @@ To integrate this into the overall calculation, we will first get the total envi
 
 For each Scaleway product or service, we calculate the water consumption based on its energy consumption.
 
-To estimate the water consumption by multiplying the total energy consumption for each service by the WUE, as such:
+To estimate the water consumption by multiplying the total energy consumption for each service by the [Water Usage Effectiveness (WUE)](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/concepts/#water-usage-effectiveness), as such:
 
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 Water Consumption (liters) = Energy Consumption (kWh) × WUE (liters/kWh)

environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/index.mdx

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ meta:
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    productName="Environmental Footprint"
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-   description="Scaleway's Environmental footprint calculator allows you to measure the impact of your Scaleway cloud services, and Bare Metal offers' impact on the environment."
+   description="Scaleway's Environmental footprint calculator Allows you to measure your environmental impact to your use of Scaleway cloud and bare metal services."
    url="/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/additional-content/environmental-footprint-calculator"
    label="Environmental Footprint calculator breakdown"
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