feat(efc): review elise 2

Author: ldecarvalho-doc

pages/environmental-footprint/additional-content/block-storage-env-footprint.mdx

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ This page includes the specificities of the environmental footprint calculation
 The total estimated impact of Block Storage volumes is calculated by integrating the:
 
 - **Dedicated manufacturing impact** - Related to the physical servers hosting the storage volumes.
-- **Usage Impact** - The impact of the tools used to manage the Block Storage offers: control plane, monitoring, internal load balancers, and others.
+- **Related manufacturing impact** - The impact of the tools used to manage the Block Storage offers: control plane, monitoring, internal load balancers, and others.
 - **Energy usage impact** - The average electricity consumption of storage servers and their energy efficiency and of the tools used to manage the Block Storage offers.
 
 ### Ratio per storage volume
@@ -58,6 +58,8 @@ For the example below, we consider a single server with a lifespan of 6 years (5
 VolumeManufacturingImpact = (100 / 52560) * 850 * 0,6 = 0,97 kgCO2e
 ```
 
+In the example, the dedicated manufacturing impact of a 600 GB usage for 100 hours is 0,97 kgCo2e.
+
 ### Usage impact
 
 The calculation of the usage impact of Block Storage volumes is based on:
@@ -73,4 +75,5 @@ In the example below, they are O,065kgCo2e/kwh and 1,16, respectively. Consideri
 UsageImpact = (0,600 x 0,065) * 100 * 0,6 = 2,34 kgCo2e
 ```
 
+In the example, the usage impact of a 600 GB usage for 100 hours is 2,34 kgCo2e.