docs(dedibox-hardware): update smartctl troubleshooting int-fix-dedibox-defective-disk-position

Author: thiercelinflorian

pages/dedibox-hardware/troubleshooting/diagnose-defective-disk.mdx

@@ -189,9 +189,9 @@ Local Time is: Fri Oct 29 11:20:27 2010 CEST
 
 ## Retrieve disk position
 
-The most important step when you create a support ticket to replace a defective disk is to also provide the **physical location** of the all disks.
+When you create a support ticket to replace a defective disk, you must also provide the **physical location** of the disk.
 
-Here is a command you can run to retrieve the position of the all disks and send it the result in your ticket :
+Use the following command to retrieve the position of all disks, and copy/paste the result into your support ticket :
 
 <Message type="important">
   This command works **only for software RAID** setups.