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Co-authored-by: Rowena Jones <[email protected]>

Author: nerda-codes

pages/dedibox-ipv6/how-to/configure-ipv6-linux.mdx

@@ -127,9 +127,9 @@ It replaces the classical network configuration with new configuration files, wr
 
 This expands the tutorial on [dhcpcd](/tutorials/dhcpcd-dedibox/).
 
-On certain Linux distributions like Debian Trixie, you may also find `dhcpcd` alongside `ifup` (`dhcpcd-base` must be installed).
+On certain Linux distributions like Debian Trixie, you may find `dhcpcd` alongside `ifup` (`dhcpcd-base` must be installed).
 
-If your server supports SLAAC, you must enable it in your dashboard. If it is not provided to your Dedibox, just skip to the dhcpcd configuration.
+If your server supports SLAAC, you must enable it in your dashboard. If it is not provided for your Dedibox, you can skip to the dhcpcd configuration.
 Then make sure the interface and firewall allows IPv6 routing advertisements.
 
 For instance, if your interface is named `eno1`, as root, you can set it using:
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ echo 1 > /proc/sys/net/ipv6/conf/eno1/accept_ra
 Then configure `dhcpcd`.
 
 You must first copy DUID into  `/var/lib/dhcpcd/duid`. This file is auto-generated the first time by `dhcpcd`.
-While there is a `duid <uuid>` option in the configuration, Scaleway one is not in the correct format, resulting in the client using the generated one.
+While there is a `duid <uuid>` option in the configuration, the Scaleway one is not in the correct format, resulting in the client using the generated one.
 
 Finally update the configuration of `/etc/dhcpcd.conf` with the following:
 
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ On Debian, you can restart `networking` which relies on `ifup`:
 sudo systemctl restart networking
 ```
 
-Or if you use a distribution that has `dhcpcd` standalone:
+Or if you use a distribution that has standalone `dhcpcd`:
 
 ```
 sudo systemctl restart dhcpcd@eno1