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 product: apple-silicon
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-Monthly commitment plan for Apple silicon is a new billing plan to enjoy better rates than pay-as-you-go pricing.
+We have introduced a monthly commitment plan for Apple silicon. This is a new billing plan, offering better rates than pay-as-you-go pricing.
 
 The initial commitment is for one month from the server order. At the end of your initial commitment period, the commitment is automatically renewed every month on the anniversary date unless you choose to delete the machine, in which case the deletion will take effect on the anniversary date of the commitment.