feat(domains): weekly review (#3774)

Author: nerda-codes

network/domains-and-dns/how-to/renew-domain.mdx

@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@ content:
   paragraph: Learn how to effortlessly renew your domain. This guide provides step-by-step instructions for accessing your domain details, selecting your preferred renewal period, and confirming your renewal securely through the Scaleway console.
 tags: renew domain dns
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-03-25
+  validation: 2024-09-30
   posted: 2023-09-19
 categories:
   - network
 ---
 
-This page shows you how to renew your domain name.
+This page shows you how to renew your domain using Scaleway Domains and DNS.
 
 <Macro id="requirements" />
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ This page shows you how to renew your domain name.
     <Message type="note">
      You can renew your domain for up to 9 years with a maximum domain name registration period of 10 years.
     </Message>
-5. Check the box to confirm you understand your domain will be renewed and that you will be debited the displayed price.
+5. Tick the box to confirm you understand your domain will be renewed and that you will be debited the displayed price.
 
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-domains-and-dns-renew-domain.webp" alt="" />
 6. Click **Renew this domain**. Your domain displays in the **Operations** tab until the renewal is complete.

network/domains-and-dns/how-to/transfer-external-domain.mdx

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ content:
   paragraph: Learn how to transfer an external domain to Scaleway with our comprehensive guide. Discover step-by-step instructions, from verifying domain availability to initiating the transfer, and managing authorizations.
 tags: external-domain domain dns
 dates:
-  validation: 2024-03-25
+  validation: 2024-09-30
   posted: 2022-03-01
 categories:
   - network
@@ -23,11 +23,11 @@ categories:
 
 ## How to transfer .fr and .be domains
 
-1. Click **Domains and DNS** in the **Network** section of the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com) side menu. The Domains and DNS dashboard displays. 
-2. Click <Icon name="plus" /> **Register new domain**:
+1. Click **Domains and DNS** in the **Network** section of the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com) side menu. The Domains and DNS dashboard displays.
+2. Click ** + Register new domain**.
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-register_new_domain.webp" alt="" />
-3. Enter the domain name you wish to transfer in the box and click the search icon to verify the domain is available. A selection of available domain names displays.
-4. Click **Transfer** next to the domain name you wish to transfer. A screen displays to help you prepare your transfer.
+3. Enter the domain name you wish to transfer in the box and click the search icon to verify that the domain is available. A selection of available domains displays.
+4. Click **Transfer** next to the domain you wish to transfer. A screen displays to help you prepare your transfer.
     <Message type="important">
         - You must have administrative rights to manage and unlock your domain for transfers.
         - You must have the authorization code to initiate the transfer.
@@ -39,15 +39,15 @@ categories:
     <Message type="tip">
      You can find your authorization code under your domain information or by asking for it directly to your current registrar.
     </Message>
-7. Check the box confirming you accept to be debited.
-8. Click **Transfer domain**. Once your domain transfer is approved, your domain will display in your **Internal Domains** tab.
+7. Tick the box confirming you accept to be debited.
+8. Click **Transfer domain**. Once your domain transfer is approved, your domain will display in your **Internal domains** tab.
 
 ## How to transfer domains with other extensions
 
-1. Click **Domains and DNS** in the **Network** section of the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com) side menu. The Domains and DNS dashboard displays. 
-2. Click <Icon name="plus" /> **Register new domain**:
+1. Click **Domains and DNS** in the **Network** section of the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com) side menu. The Domains and DNS dashboard displays.
+2. Click ** + Register new domain**:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-register_new_domain.webp" alt="" />
-3. Enter the domain name you wish to transfer in the box and click the search icon to verify the domain is available. A selection of available domain names displays.
+3. Enter the domain you wish to transfer in the box and click the search icon to verify that the domain is available. A selection of available domains displays.
 4. Click **Transfer** next to the domain name you wish to transfer. A screen displays to help you prepare your transfer.
     <Message type="important">
         - You must have administrative rights to manage and unlock your domain for transfers.
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ categories:
      You can find your authorization code under your domain information or by asking your current registrar for it directly.
     </Message>
 7. Select an existing registrant contact or create a new one and click **Validate**. Your order summary displays.
-8. Check the box confirming you accept to be debited.
-9. Click **Transfer domain**. Once your domain transfer is approved, your domain will display in your **Internal Domains** tab.
+8. Tick the box confirming you accept to be debited.
+9. Click **Transfer domain**. Once your domain transfer is approved, your domain will display in your **Internal domains** tab.