fix(rdb): review ro

Co-authored-by: Rowena Jones <[email protected]>

Author: ldecarvalho-doc

pages/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/troubleshooting/database-instance-connectivity-issues.mdx

@@ -25,15 +25,15 @@ I cannot connect to my Database Instance through the public network.
 - The Database Instance TLS certificate is outdated
 - Your allowed IPs are not properly configured
 - You have reached the maximum number of connections
-- The Database Instance experiences instabilities due to a high load
+- The Database Instance is experiencing instabilities due to a high load
 
 ### Solution
 
 You can check the following points to identify and act on what might be causing the issue:
 
-1. If TLS is enabled on the Database Instance, make sure the certificate is up-to-date, and that your client application is properly configured.
+1. If TLS is enabled on the Database Instance, make sure the certificate is up to date, and that your client application is properly configured.
 2. Make sure your [ACLs](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/concepts/#allowed-ips) are [properly configured](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/manage-allowed-ip-addresses).
-3. Make sure your Database Instance does not reach the maximum number of connections stipulated in the advanced settings of the Database Instance. You can monitor the number of connections on [Cockpit](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/monitor-databases-cockpit). You can also [adjust the advances settings](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/configure-advanced-settings) to accept a higher number of connections.
+3. Make sure your Database Instance has not reached the maximum number of connections stipulated in the advanced settings of the Database Instance. You can monitor the number of connections on [Cockpit](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/monitor-databases-cockpit). You can also [adjust the advances settings](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/configure-advanced-settings) to accept a higher number of connections.
 4. [Monitor other usage metrics on Cockpit](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/monitor-databases-cockpit) to:
 
     - Check if the memory usage is nominal. High memory usage could trigger OOM Kills and cause disconnection