fix(iam): review ro

Co-authored-by: Rowena Jones <[email protected]>

Author: ldecarvalho-doc

pages/iam/how-to/manage-members.mdx

@@ -20,13 +20,13 @@ dates:
 1. Click **Identity and Access Management (IAM)** from the top-right of your [Organization Dashboard](https://console.scaleway.com/organization) in the Scaleway console. The **Users** tab of the [Identity and Access Management dashboard](https://console.scaleway.com/iam/users) displays.
 2. Click **+ Add user**. A pop-up displays prompting you to choose between creating a **Member** or adding a **Guest**.
 3. Select **Member** and click **Continue**.
-4. Enter a username of the Member you want to add to your Organization.
+4. Enter the username of the Member you want to add to your Organization.
     <Message type="important">
       When you create a Member, a Scaleway account is created for them. They exist only within your Organization. If you delete the Member, their account is also deleted. Make sure you inform your Members that [logging into an Organization as a Member](/iam/how-to/log-in-as-a-member) is different from [logging in as a Guest or as an Owner](/account/how-to/log-in-to-the-console).
     </Message>
 5. (Optional) Add a password.
     <Message type="note">
-      If you set a password, make sure you keep note of it to share it with the Member later. The password will only be shown once. If password renewal is enforced in the Organization, from their first login, the Member has up to update their password and comply with this security requirement within the [grace period](/iam/concepts#grace-period) of your Organization.
+      If you set a password, make sure you keep note of it to share it with the Member later. The password will only be shown once. If password renewal is enforced in the Organization, from their first login, the Member must update their password. They must comply with this security requirement within the [grace period](/iam/concepts#grace-period) defined for your Organization.
     </Message>
 6. (Optional) Check the box if you want to send the password to the Member via email.
 7. Click **Next**.
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ dates:
 12. Click **Create Member**.
 
     <Message type="important">
-      If you did not send an welcome email to the Member, make sure you give them their login information.
+      If you did not send a welcome email to the Member, make sure you give them their login information.
     </Message>
 
 ## How to lock a Member

pages/iam/how-to/manage-users.mdx

@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ A user may be attached to multiple policies.
 2. Select an action between: **creating a new policy**, **selecting an unassigned policy** or **duplicating an existing policy**.
 
     <Message type="note">
-      When you [create a new policy](/iam/how-to/create-policy/) or duplicate an existing one, you are redirected to the IAM policies page. The following steps apply when you chose to select an unassigned policy.
+      When you [create a new policy](/iam/how-to/create-policy/) or duplicate an existing one, you are redirected to the IAM policies page. The following steps apply when you choose to select an unassigned policy.
     </Message>
 3. Select the policy you want to attach to the user from the drop-down list.
 4. Click **Validate** to finish.

pages/iam/quickstart.mdx

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Invite other users to be able to give them access to your Organization. You will
 5. (Optional) Check the box if you want to send a welcome email to the Member.
 6. Add a password.
     <Message type="note">
-      If you set a password, make sure you keep note of it to share it with the Member later. The password will only be shown once. If password renewal is enforced in the Organization, from their first login, the Member has up to update their password and comply with this security requirement within the [grace period](/iam/concepts#grace-period) of your Organization.
+      If you set a password, make sure you keep note of it to share it with the Member later. The password will only be shown once. If password renewal is enforced in the Organization, from their first login, the Member must update their password. They must comply with this security requirement within the [grace period](/iam/concepts#grace-period) defined for your Organization.
     </Message>
 7. (Optional) Check the box if you want to send the password to the Member via email.
 8. Click **Create Member**.