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-title: Start-9-M price drop, now at € 39.99!
+title: Start-9-M price drop, now at €39.99!
 status: changed
 date: 2025-06-27
 category: bare-metal
 product: dedibox
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-The AMD Ryzen CPU-based offer Start-9-M now comes with a reduced price:
+We're excited to announce that our AMD Ryzen CPU-based offer, Start-9-M, is now available at a reduced price:
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 * Old price: €59.99/month
 * New price: €39.99/month
 
-Usual commitments of 12 months and 36 months can also apply making you benefit respectively of extra 5% or 15% off on the monthly fee.
+Our standard 12-month and 36-month commitments still apply, allowing you to benefit from an additional 5% or 15% discount on your monthly fee, respectively.
 
-It becomes the [market's most affordable 6-core dedicated servers](https://www.scaleway.com/en/amd-ryzen-dedicated-server/).
+With this new pricing, our AMD Ryzen dedicated servers become the [market's most affordable 6-core dedicated servers](https://www.scaleway.com/en/amd-ryzen-dedicated-server/).