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Co-authored-by: Rowena Jones <[email protected]>

Author: nerda-codes

changelog/march2025/2025-03-20-jobs-fixed-pull-errors-fixed.mdx

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 product: jobs
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-A very low percentage of Job Runs faced pull errors impacting execution. 
+A very low percentage of Job runs faced pull errors impacting execution. 
 
-We identified and fixed the issue on all of our regions.
+We have now identified and fixed the issue across all regions.