fix(rdb): review jessi

Co-authored-by: Jessica <[email protected]>

Author: ldecarvalho-doc

pages/kubernetes/reference-content/secure-cluster-with-private-network.mdx

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Yes, they are. Since July 2023, the automatic allocation of IP addresses via IPA
 
 For any new Private Networks you create and attach to Managed Databases after July 2023, your private IP addresses are automatically allocated.
 
-If you have set up Private Network endpoints for your Managed Databases before July 2023, and want to connect to Kapsule via a Private Network, you must first delete your old private network endpoint. Then, you can create a new one, either via the [Scaleway console](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/connect-database-instance/#how-to-connect-to-a-database-instance-through-a-private-network/#how-to-attach-a-database-instance-to-a-private-network) or API.
+If you have set up Private Network endpoints for your Managed Databases before July 2023, and want to connect to Kapsule via a Private Network, you must first delete your old Private Network endpoint. Then, you can create a new one, either via the [Scaleway console](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/connect-database-instance/#how-to-connect-to-a-database-instance-through-a-private-network/#how-to-attach-a-database-instance-to-a-private-network) or API.
 
 In the example below, we show you how to do so via the API. We specify the automated configuration of your Private Network via IPAM using `"ipam_config": {},`.
 

pages/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/manage-nodes.mdx

@@ -32,16 +32,16 @@ You can change your Database Instance the node type and enable High Availability
       Make sure that the Database Instance you choose provides sufficient disk space for your database. Otherwise, an error message will be displayed, and the database will not be upgraded.
     </Message>
 
-The action of changing the node type will perform a rolling upgrade of your Database Instance. During this process, the Database Instance will be unavailable for several tens of seconds.
+Changing the node type performs a rolling upgrade of your Database Instance. During this process, the Database Instance will be unavailable for several seconds.
 
-## Enable High Availability
+## How to enable High Availability
 
 You define your Database Instance's node configuration upon its [creation](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/create-a-database). Two node configuration modes are available with PostgreSQL or MySQL Database Instances.
 
 - **High Availability**: creates a secondary Instance with an up-to-date replica of the database. If the primary Instance fails, the secondary takes over requests.
 - **Standalone**: a standalone database provisioned on a single node.
 
-If you are standalone mode, you can change the node configuration to High Availability in the console anytime.
+If you are in standalone mode, you can change the node configuration to High Availability in the console at any time.
 
 <Message type="important">
   Once you upgrade to the High Availability mode, you cannot revert to standalone.
@@ -61,5 +61,5 @@ If you are standalone mode, you can change the node configuration to High Availa
 6. Click **Activate**.
 
     <Message type="note">
-      The action of changing the node configuration will perform a rolling upgrade of your Database Instance. During this process, the Database Instance will be unavailable for several tens of seconds.
+Changing the node type performs a rolling upgrade of your Database Instance. During this process, the Database Instance will be unavailable for several seconds.
     </Message>

pages/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/manage-snapshots.mdx

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ When you set up [autobackups](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to
 You can create new Database Instances from a snapshot.
 
 <Message type="important">
-  Refer to the [How to create a Database Instance from a snapshot]() procedure for more information.
+  Refer to the [How to create a Database Instance from a snapshot](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/create-a-database#how-to-create-a-database-instance-from-a-snapshot) procedure for more information.
 </Message>
 
 You can have up to 100 snapshots per Instance and Project (depending on quotas).

pages/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/how-to/manage-users.mdx

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Users can connect to a database and access its data. Each one has a different se
     </Message>
 
     <Message type="important">
-      Permissions are applied on existing items **at the moment the configuration is set**, and not applied to any items created afterward.
+      Permissions are applied to existing items **at the moment the configuration is set**. They cannot be applied to any items created afterward.
       When you modify your Database configuration, your configured permissions are automatically set to **Custom**. The **Custom** setting ensures that your permissions are still valid for items created before you reconfigured your Database.
       Any items created after you change your configuration will not have permissions applied to them, you must set new permissions.
     </Message>
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ To update the password, the permissions or delete the user, click <Icon name="mo
 
 ## Set permissions for an existing user
 
-Permissions define the actions a user can perform on a logical database. A database user is generated automatically when you create your Database Instance and this user is attributed all permissions. However, newly created users have no permissions by default.
+Permissions define the actions a user can perform on a logical database. A database user is automatically generated when you create your Database Instance, to whom the permissions are attributed. However, newly created users have no permissions by default.
 
 1. Click **PostgreSQL and MySQL** under **Databases** on the side menu. A list of your Database Instances displays.
 2. Select the geographical region of the Instance you want to manage from the drop-down.
@@ -68,7 +68,3 @@ Permissions define the actions a user can perform on a logical database. A datab
 
     </Message>
 7. Click **Update user** to confirm.
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