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Co-authored-by: Rowena Jones <[email protected]>

Author: bene2k1

bare-metal/apple-silicon/troubleshooting/cant-create-apple-account.mdx

@@ -34,9 +34,10 @@ If you are unable to create an Apple Account on your hosted Mac mini, follow the
    - Password: Create a strong and secure password for your account.
    - Phone number: Enter your phone number. It will be used for two factor authentication and account recovery.
    Verify your information and click **Continue** to proceed.
-4. Apple will send a verification email to the address you provided. Open the email and follow the instructions to verify your account.
-5. After verification, you will need to agree to Apple's terms and conditions to complete the process. Tick the checkbox and click on the corresponding button to agree.
-6. After successfully creating your Apple Account, return to your hosted Mac mini and sign in using your new credentials.
+    Apple will send a verification email to the address you provided. 
+ 4. Open the email and follow the instructions to verify your account.
+5. After verification, agree to Apple's terms and conditions to complete the process. Tick the checkbox and click on the corresponding button to agree.
+6. Return to your hosted Mac mini and sign in using your new credentials, having successfully created your Apple Account.
 
 <Message type="note">
   The information provided above is for reference only. For detailed instructions or if you encounter any issues while creating your Apple Account, refer to [Apple's official documentation](https://support.apple.com/en-us/108647) on how to create a new Apple Account.