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Co-authored-by: Jessica <[email protected]>

Author: bene2k1

pages/apple-silicon/troubleshooting/index.mdx

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     />
     <DefaultCard
       title="SSH connection issues"
-"
       description="This page helps you to resolve connection issues to your Mac mini via SSH."
       url="/apple-silicon/troubleshooting/cant-connect-using-ssh/"
       label="See more"
     />
     <DefaultCard
-      title="Troubleshooting remote desktop connections to Mac mini servers"
-      description="This page helps you to resolve remote desktop (VNC) connection issues to your Mac mini."
+      title="Remote desktop errors"
+      description="Learn how to solve remote desktop (VNC) connection issues to your Mac mini."
       url="/apple-silicon/troubleshooting/cant-connect-using-vnc/"
       label="See more"
     />
 </Grid>
 <Grid>
     <DefaultCard
-      title="Troubleshooting account creation for hosted Mac minis"
-      description="This page helps you to resolve Apple account creation issues from your hosted Mac muni"
+      title="Fixing Mac mini account creation errors"
+      description="Common Apple account creation issues from your hosted Mac mini and how to fix them."
       url="/apple-silicon/troubleshooting/cant-create-apple-account/"
       label="See more"
     />
     <DefaultCard
       title="Troubleshooting deletion issues with Mac minis"
-      description="This page helps you to resolve issues you may encounter when you want to delete your Mac mini."
+      description="Resolve issues you may encounter when trying to delete a Mac mini."
       url="/apple-silicon/troubleshooting/cant-delete-mac-mini/"
       label="See more"
     />
     <DefaultCard
       title="Bare Metal Shared Responsibility Model"
-      description="Our shared responsibility model clarifies the division of duties between Scaleway and our users."
+      description="Understand the division of duties between Scaleway and our users."
       url="/elastic-metal/reference-content/shared-responsibility-model/"
       label="See more"
     />