add(changelog): review rowena

Co-authored-by: Rowena Jones <[email protected]>

Author: nerda-codes

changelog/november2024/2024-11-05-functions-added-serverless-network-metrics.mdx

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Serverless network metrics
+title: Serverless network metrics are evolving
 status: added
 author:
     fullname: 'Join the #serverless-functions channel on Slack.'
@@ -9,6 +9,6 @@ category: serverless
 product: functions
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-Metrics are evolving, in Serverless Functions metrics panel we added access to network informations on received data and transmitted data.
+In the Serverless Functions metrics panel we have added access to network information on received and transmitted data.